Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇不少于100字的文章。

要點(diǎn)：1.節(jié)約能源和資源的好處。

（節(jié)約水，電，錢save；減少了空氣、水源的污染reduce pollution；環(huán)保live a green life）

2.學(xué)生節(jié)約能源和資源的具體做法

（洗澡時(shí)間縮短take shorter showers；紙用雙面；use both sides of the paper；刷牙時(shí)關(guān)掉水龍頭 turn off the tap when brushing teeth；離開房間時(shí)關(guān)掉電燈turn off the lights when they leave a room; recycling empty bottles; 。。。。。。。）

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Answer 1

【答案】

How to go green

Our environment is changing for the worse. In order to reduce air pollution and water pollution andsave money ，it’s time for us to go green. As students, we can take some simple steps .

We can save water by taking shorter shower and turning off the tap when we brush our teeth .We can save power by turning off the lights when we leave a room. When we go shopping , we should take ourown bags .When we write , we can use both sides of paper .Whenever we see the rubbish on the ground, we should pick it up and throw it into dustbins. It’s important for us to do more exercise and watch less TV. It’s good to plant some flowers at home

It’s our duty to protect the environment. Follow these small steps, and we can make a big difference to the earth.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文，所給提示簡(jiǎn)潔明了，要求明確，話題內(nèi)容貼近學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)實(shí)際，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題，勾勒要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。行文中要注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)以及主謂一致問題。同時(shí)注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文能夠根據(jù)寫作提示，較好地把與寫作相關(guān)的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行歸納整合，要點(diǎn)全面，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯；同時(shí)，靈活使用多種句式，使文章脈絡(luò)清晰，層次鮮明。此外，文章中還使用了一些常用的句式和短語，如in order to、it’s time for sb to do sth、turn off、It’s +形容詞+ for sb to do sth句型等，這為文章增色不少。在平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)中注意加強(qiáng)練筆，掌握一些常用句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。