Question

20．近年來，中小學生的健康問題日益引起人們的關注．請你以How to keep healthy 為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，談談你的看法和建議．
要求：主要包括以下內(nèi)容，可以適當發(fā)揮．文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
1．列舉中小學生面臨的健康問題，如go to school without breakfast，play computer games，watch TV，drink or smoke，
2．提出保持健康的合理建議；
3．發(fā)表自己的看法．
How to Keep Healthy
Everyone needs to keep healthy today，especially we students．But we don't know the importance of keeping healthy．                                          

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Many boys think it is cool to drink or smoke許多男孩認為喝酒抽煙很酷．
think后是省略了that的賓語從句．
【高分句型二】
It is important for us to have good habits對于我們有好習慣是重要的．
it's+adj+for sb+to do sth 對于我來說做某事是怎樣的．

解答 How to Keep Healthy
Everyone needs to keep healthy today，especially we students，But we don't know the importance of keeping healthy．Some of us go to school without breakfast in the morning．Some students play computer games or watch TV all day，especially on the weekend．Many boys think it is cool to drink or smoke【高分句型一】．（面臨的健康問題）
It is important for us to have good habits【高分句型二】．We should have breakfast every morning．We can watch TV or play computer games for a short time，and then have a rest．We can also join some sports clubs．（合理建議）
1 think it is necessary for us to keep healthy．（看法）

點評 寫作要抓住要點．要在"準"字上下功夫．在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動詞的數(shù)關系和動詞時態(tài)等諸多方面．在平時的練習中，注意多背誦范文，對于寫的好的句子要進行默寫，這樣在寫作時就能寫出準確地道的作文．