Question

【題目】書面表達

同學(xué)們，中考過后，你們將要告別親愛的母校。 回首三年的母校生活，學(xué)校里有很多規(guī)則有助于你的健康成長。你能談?wù)勀銈儗W(xué)校有哪些規(guī)定嗎？你對這些校規(guī)有什么看法？你對母校有哪些合理化建議？請以“My School Rules”為題，寫一篇短文。

要求：1. 語言表達準確，語義通順連貫；

2. 書寫工整，規(guī)范；

3. 根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容，請做適當發(fā)揮；

4. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和地名；

5. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右。 文章題目和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

My School Rules

In our school, we have many rules.

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Answer 1

【答案】

In our school, we have many rules. We shouldn’t be late for school. We have to wear school uniforms to school every day. We can’t run or shout in the hallways. We can’t eat in class. We should listen to the teachers carefully in class. We aren’t allowed to smoke in school.

I think our school rules are too strict. We should be allowed to choose our own clothes. That will make us more comfortable. We shouldn’t have too much homework to do every day.

【解析】

試題解析：這是一篇話題作文。就自己學(xué)校的校規(guī)從三個方面描述：學(xué)校的校規(guī)是什么，對校規(guī)的看法，針對校規(guī)有哪些建議。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時。因為受英語水平的限制，所描述的校規(guī)要是自己詞匯量能表達的內(nèi)容。在描述中可以用到should，be allowed, can, can’t 等等。

寫作亮點：這篇短文層次分明。首先介紹自己學(xué)校的校規(guī)，然后根據(jù)自己的感受評價校規(guī)，之后說出自己的建議。在寫作中詞匯變化，如can’t ,shouldn’t , not be allowed等。