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13．老人跌倒該不該扶，敢不敢扶，一度成為社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)．針對(duì)這一話題，人們做了一個(gè)調(diào)查．下面是調(diào)查結(jié)果，請你據(jù)此寫一篇文章．
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
1．調(diào)查結(jié)果是什么？
該幫
2．你認(rèn)為是否該去幫助跌倒老人，請說明原因． 如果該幫助，那你會(huì)怎么幫？
不該幫
3．號(hào)召大家對(duì)需要幫助的人施以援手．
要求：
1．不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名．
2．字?jǐn)?shù)80字左右，文章開頭已給出．
We did a survey about whether we should help the old when they fall down，and here are the results．Only a small percentage of people think they will help the old，while 42% of people refuse to help the old，also there are some people who say it's not easy to say．In my opinion，we should help the old people，because we all have parents，and we will grow old one day．If all of us are not willing to give our hands，how can we ask others to help ourselves？
So I strongly call on people to show your love to the old，not only for others but also for ourselves．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內(nèi)容是根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果說說老人跌倒扶不扶這個(gè)熱點(diǎn)．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．調(diào)查結(jié)果：42%認(rèn)為不該幫，19%該幫，38%不好說
2．你的看法和原因；
 3．號(hào)召大家對(duì)需要幫助的人施以援手．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
fall down 跌倒
refuse to do sth 拒絕做某事
be willing to do sth 樂意做某事
ask sb to do sth 讓某人做某事
call on 號(hào)召
not only…but also…不僅…而且…
【高分句型】
1．Only a small percentage of people think①they will help the old，②while 42% of people ③refuse to help the old，also ④there are some people ⑤who say⑥it's not easy to say．
①think后是省略了that的賓語從句．
②while表示然而，連詞，前后表對(duì)比
③refuse to do sth 拒絕做某事
④there be 有
⑤who作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，who作為從句的主語，修飾先行詞people．
⑥say后是省略了that的賓語從句．it作為形式主語，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語，構(gòu)成it's+adj+to do sth 做某事是怎樣的．
2．①If all of us ②are not willing to give our hands，how can we ③ask others to help ourselves？
①if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句．
②be willing to do sth 樂意做某事
③ask sb to do sth 讓某人做某事
3．So I strongly ①call on people to show your love to the old，②not only for others but also for ourselves．
①call on 號(hào)召
②not only…but also…不僅…而且…連接前后兩個(gè)并列的短語

解答 We did a survey about whether we should help the old when they fall down，and here are the results．Only a small percentage of people think they will help the old，while 42% of people refuse to help the old，also there are some people who say it's not easy to say．【高分句型】（調(diào)查結(jié)果）In my opinion，we should help the old people，because we all have parents，and we will grow old one day．If all of us are not willing to give our hands，how can we ask others to help ourselves？【高分句型】（我認(rèn)為該幫及原因）
So I strongly call on people to show your love to the old，not only for others but also for ourselves．【高分句型】（號(hào)召大家對(duì)需要幫助的人施以援手）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這篇作文是以話題老人跌倒該不該扶，敢不敢扶為主題，題目以圖畫提供數(shù)據(jù)，通過細(xì)心觀察圖中的數(shù)字，表示不同人的觀點(diǎn)，寫作時(shí)要合理使用信息，弄清寫作的意圖，通過分析思考把握邏輯聯(lián)系，找出主題并借助所給的文字，把圖中的信息轉(zhuǎn)化成文章．在表述自己的觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，要合理并寫出理由，最后要給出建議．
這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少．如：Only a small percentage of people think they will help the old，while 42% of people refuse to help the old，also there are some people who say it's not easy to say．使用到了連詞while以及定語從句． If all of us are not willing to give our hands，how can we ask others to help ourselves？條件狀語從句．In my opinion，call on，not only for others but also for ourselves．等等．學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．