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4．當今社會，無論在大街小巷、餐館，還是聚會場所，你都能看見一些人正低著頭玩手機．網(wǎng)絡上給他們?nèi)×艘粋�有趣的名字叫"低頭族"．作為中學生，對此現(xiàn)象，你有什么看法？請寫一篇80--100詞的文章．
寫作要求：1．書寫工整，語句通順；
2．文章中請勿使用真實姓名或地名；
3．自擬作文標題．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：With the development of society and science，mobile phones are widely used in our daily life．隨著社會和科學的進步，手機在我們的日常生活中廣泛應用．
With the development of society and science是with的復合結(jié)構(gòu)，在句中說明背景情況．
句型二：①In a word，the mobile phone ②plays an important part in our life，but we ought to use it correctly．總之，手機在我們的生活中起著重要的作用，但是我們應該正確使用它．
In a word是介詞短語，意思是"總而言之，總之"； play an important part in是一個常見的短語，意思是"在…中起著重要的作用"

解答 With the development of society and science，mobile phones are widely used in our daily life．【高分句型一】
We can see a number of mobile phone fans almost everywhere．As a middle school student，how should we use mobile phones properly？
We shouldn't spend too much time playing with our dear mobile phones．First，playing with phones is harmful to our eyes．Second，we have so much school-work to do．Third，we'd better talk to each other face to face instead of chatting on the phone．What's worse，if we pay much more attention to our phones，dangerous things may happen to us．【怎樣正確使用手機】
In a word，the mobile phone plays an important part in our life，but we ought to use it correctly．【高分句型二】Then we can have a better life．（總結(jié)全文）

點評 考生在寫作時，首先要仔細審題，要注意使用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要使用現(xiàn)在的時態(tài)，在表述的時候要選用合適地道的語言，為使行文連貫流暢，可以使用first，second，third．可以使用with的復合結(jié)構(gòu)，動名詞短語等提高得分點的結(jié)構(gòu)．