Question

16．（A） 根據(jù)要求完成小作文，詞數(shù)：30-40詞左右．
要點(diǎn)如下：本周六是王洪的生日，許多同學(xué)將去她家參加生日聚會(huì)．王洪愛(ài)好廣泛，為人友善；經(jīng)常幫父母做家務(wù)．一些同學(xué)打算向父母要錢(qián)買(mǎi)禮物送給她．你對(duì)同學(xué)們花錢(qián)買(mǎi)禮物一事的看法及理由．
要求：不要逐字翻譯．

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于陳述正反方觀點(diǎn)的議論文作文，主題是花錢(qián)為同學(xué)買(mǎi)禮物好不好．本題所給材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，故動(dòng)筆前一定要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容確定人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)等問(wèn)題．內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．
高分句型：
①She often helps her parents with the housework．她經(jīng)常幫著她父母做家務(wù)．help sb with sth幫著某人做某事．

②But I don't think it's a good idea，because that'll cost our parents'money．但是我認(rèn)為這不是一個(gè)好主意，因?yàn)槟且�花我們父母的錢(qián)．句子中think后面跟的是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，because在句子中引導(dǎo)一個(gè)原因狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Wang Hong is a friendly girl and has a lot of hobbies．She often helps her parents with the housework（高分句型）（介紹王洪的基本情況）．It's her birthday this Saturday．Many classmates will go to her home for her birthday party．Some of them will ask their parents for some money to buy her gifts（同學(xué)們將參加晚會(huì)并買(mǎi)一些禮物）．But I don't think it's a good idea，because that'll cost our parents'money（高分句型）．I'm going to make a birthday card for her by myself．I'm sure she'll like it．（我對(duì)此事的看法以及我的做法）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 做英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)時(shí)，只要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句．最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤．