Question

8．時(shí)下，全國(guó)上下都在努力實(shí)現(xiàn)"中國(guó)夢(mèng)、強(qiáng)國(guó)夢(mèng)"．那么，作為新時(shí)代的中學(xué)生，你又有著什么你的夢(mèng)想呢？結(jié)合自己的興趣愛(ài)好或者生活背景，以my dream為題，談?wù)勀愕膲?mèng)想以及如何實(shí)現(xiàn)你夢(mèng)想．
要求：
1、語(yǔ)言正確，行文流暢，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；
2、詞數(shù)80詞左右二
3，文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、學(xué)�；蛩�在地名等．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇材料作文．本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)但很簡(jiǎn)單，要求以my dream為題談?wù)勀愕膲?mèng)想以及如何實(shí)現(xiàn)你夢(mèng)想．重點(diǎn)應(yīng)放在你為什么會(huì)有這樣的夢(mèng)想上．我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)．動(dòng)筆前要仔細(xì)考慮，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．要注意要求，嚴(yán)格按照要求去寫(xiě)作．根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知，本文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱．

解答 參考范文：
                                                                               My dream
Everyone has his own dream．Some want to be doctors．Others hope to be scientists．My dream is to become a teacher．
Teachers can not teach us many things at school，but they do their best to teach us how to learn．Thanks to them，we learn knowledge．And at the same time，we learn how to live a happy life．They spend most time on their students．They are great in my eyes．
I hope to be a teacher because I admire teachers．I know it is not easy to make my dream come true．But I decide to try my best to study harder from now on．I am sure my dream will come true．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 此為話題作文．這篇文章主要是以夢(mèng)想為主題．要仔細(xì)審題，重點(diǎn)是要抓住my dream一詞詳細(xì)論述你為什么會(huì)有這樣的夢(mèng)想．在文中可恰當(dāng)使用一些較高級(jí)的短語(yǔ)和詞匯及句型如it is not easy to make my dream come true等為文章增色，增強(qiáng)文章的說(shuō)服力．要注意語(yǔ)言正確，行文流暢，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范．