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【題目】書面表達(dá)

近幾年來，越來越多的中國人出國旅游，但一些游客的不文明行為也成為國內(nèi)外輿論關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)。直接影響著中國“禮儀之邦”之形象。新華旅游局呼吁文明出游，游客應(yīng)認(rèn)真思考如何做一名“合格的旅游者”， 請(qǐng)以How to be a qualified tourist 為題目 寫一則英語短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?/span>

1 、保護(hù)環(huán)境，不隨地吐痰，不亂扔垃圾。

2 、遵守公共秩序，不在公眾場所喧嘩，購物時(shí)排隊(duì)。

3 、保護(hù)文物古跡，不到處亂涂亂刻，不攀爬觸摸文物。

4 、節(jié)約用水用電，用餐不浪費(fèi)。

注意：

1. 文章必須包括提示內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展，增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫；

2. 詞數(shù)80左右；

3. 開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

4. 參考詞匯：文物古跡cultural relics 文物artifacts

How to be a Qualified Tourist

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently, more and more Chinese people travel abroad , but some of them have bad manners .The poor behaviors or some Chinese have done great harm to our good reputation. How should we be a qualified tourist? In my opinion ,We have to understand and respect foreign cultures. First, we are supposed to protect the environment ,We shouldn’t spit or throw the rubbish everywhere. Second, we should obey the public order .We had better not shout loudly in public places , We have to wait in line when we are shopping .Third, we should protect the cultural relics. We mustn’t paint or carve on the monuments. We shouldn’t climb or touch artifacts. At the same time, we should save water and electricity. We are not supposed to waste food when we have meals . In this way, we'll win respect for ourselves as well as our country.

【解析】寫作

這篇寫作需要圍繞“如何做一個(gè)合格的游客”展開寫作，具體的要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出了。寫作的時(shí)候可以適當(dāng)借助祈使句來表示“不應(yīng)該做…”，需要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)姆绞揭�入文章，銜接好每個(gè)要點(diǎn)。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：

開頭應(yīng)該對(duì)寫作的背景進(jìn)行一定的交代�！�bad manners”表示禮貌狀況不好，然后講到了這些行為對(duì)中國的名聲有害（have done great harm to our good reputation），這里用到了現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，表示傷害已經(jīng)造成了，產(chǎn)生了不好的影響，時(shí)態(tài)的妙用是一個(gè)亮點(diǎn)。緊接著發(fā)問引入主題。借助first, second等詞串聯(lián)起自己的觀點(diǎn)。相關(guān)短語使用恰當(dāng)，“are supposed to”（應(yīng)該…），“spit or throw the rubbish everywhere”（四處亂扔垃圾），“protect the cultural relics”（保護(hù)文化遺產(chǎn)），最后文章有簡練的收尾，we'll win respect for ourselves as well as our country.（我們會(huì)為我們自己和我們的國家贏得尊重），簡練，完成了寫作任務(wù)。