Question

12．有時(shí)候，災(zāi)難或許離我們很近，如2015年6月發(fā)生的"東方之星旅游客船傾覆"事件，8月發(fā)生的"天津港大爆炸"事件．這些血的事實(shí)告訴我們：安全警鐘應(yīng)時(shí)刻鳴響．那么作為中學(xué)生，在日常生活中我們應(yīng)該如何注意安全、保護(hù)自己呢？請結(jié)合下面的提示內(nèi)容，以"How to keep safe in our life"為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文．
提示：1．安全意識的重要性；
2．與我們有關(guān)的安全；飲食安全，交通安全以及交友安全等等；
3．安全防護(hù)的方法（結(jié)合2中的某一方面，至少談兩點(diǎn)看法）．
How to keep safe in our daily life
Life safely is important to everyone．There are many kinds of safety，such as food safety，traffic safety，the safety of making friends and so on．But what are we supposed to do to keep ourselves safe？I'll take traffic safety as an example．
Whether we walk or take the bus to school，we must be careful of the traffic．Don't cross the road until there is a green light．When waiting for the bus，don't cut in line．Also，don't play or run on the busy road at any time．This way，we'll keep ourselves safe．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Don't cross the road until there is a green light綠燈才能過馬路．
not…until從句，直到…才．
【高分句型二】
When waiting for the bus，don't cut in line．當(dāng)在等車的時(shí)候，不要插隊(duì)．
When waiting for the bus，是when we are waiting for the bus的縮寫形式．

解答 How to keep safe in our daily life
  Life safely is important to everyone．There are many kinds of safety，such as food safety，traffic safety，the safety of making friends and so on．（安全意識的重要性，與我們有關(guān)的安全）But what are we supposed to do to keep ourselves safe？I'll take traffic safety as an example．
  Whether we walk or take the bus to school，we must be careful of the traffic．Don't cross the road until there is a green light．【高分句型一】When waiting for the bus，don't cut in line．【高分句型二】Also，don't play or run on the busy road at any time．This way，we'll keep ourselves safe．（安全防護(hù)的方法）

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