Question

15．B．圖示作文：請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇文章．

作文要求：1、話(huà)題作文或圖示作文任選其一．
2、要求字跡工整，語(yǔ)法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
3、詞數(shù)80--100
Xiao Ming is a middle school student，he likes playing computer games very much．He often plays computer games in Youth Net Bar．His parents don't want him to play games because it is bad for his eyes，it also affects his study．One day Xiao Ming told his father that he wanted to buy some books． His father gave him some money and told him to study hard．Xiao Ming didn't go to the bookstore after he got the money．Instead，he went to the net bar．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
His parents don't want him to play games because it is bad for his eyes．他的父母不愿意讓他玩游戲，因?yàn)槟菍?duì)眼睛不好．這是because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句，因?yàn)椤��?br />  高分句型二
Xiao Ming didn't go to the bookstore after he got the money．小明拿到錢(qián)后沒(méi)有去書(shū)店．這是 after 引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，在…之后．

解答 Xiao Ming is a middle school student，he likes playing computer games very much．He often plays computer games in Youth Net Bar．His parents don't want him to play games because it is bad for his eyes【高分句型一，注意原因狀語(yǔ)從句的使用】，it also affects his study．One day Xiao Ming told his father that he wanted to buy some books．【要點(diǎn)一，描述圖片一】His father gave him some money and told him to study hard．【要點(diǎn)二，描述圖片二】Xiao Ming didn't go to the bookstore after he got the money【高分句型二，注意時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句的使用】．Instead，he went to the net bar．【要點(diǎn)三，描述圖片三】

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