Question

15．B．圖示作文：請根據(jù)圖片內容寫一篇文章．

作文要求：1、話題作文或圖示作文任選其一．
2、要求字跡工整，語法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當發(fā)揮．
3、詞數(shù)80--100
Xiao Ming is a middle school student，he likes playing computer games very much．He often plays computer games in Youth Net Bar．His parents don't want him to play games because it is bad for his eyes，it also affects his study．One day Xiao Ming told his father that he wanted to buy some books． His father gave him some money and told him to study hard．Xiao Ming didn't go to the bookstore after he got the money．Instead，he went to the net bar．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
His parents don't want him to play games because it is bad for his eyes．他的父母不愿意讓他玩游戲，因為那對眼睛不好．這是because引導的原因狀語從句，因為…．
  高分句型二
Xiao Ming didn't go to the bookstore after he got the money．小明拿到錢后沒有去書店．這是 after 引導的時間狀語從句，在…之后．

解答 Xiao Ming is a middle school student，he likes playing computer games very much．He often plays computer games in Youth Net Bar．His parents don't want him to play games because it is bad for his eyes【高分句型一，注意原因狀語從句的使用】，it also affects his study．One day Xiao Ming told his father that he wanted to buy some books．【要點一，描述圖片一】His father gave him some money and told him to study hard．【要點二，描述圖片二】Xiao Ming didn't go to the bookstore after he got the money【高分句型二，注意時間狀語從句的使用】．Instead，he went to the net bar．【要點三，描述圖片三】

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．