Question

14．假設(shè)你是悉尼大學(xué)一名華裔學(xué)生，名叫Jason Wu．你從China Daily上看到該報(bào)正在開(kāi)展主題為Change for a Better China的環(huán)保討論活動(dòng)．你打算結(jié)合自己所居住的小鎮(zhèn)的變化，給報(bào)社寫(xiě)一封英文信參與討論．內(nèi)容提示見(jiàn)下表：
注意事項(xiàng)：
（1）英文信須包括表格中所有提示內(nèi)容，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；
（2）表格中"感想建議"一欄須用2-3句話(huà)展開(kāi)合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
（3）詞數(shù)在90個(gè)左右，信的首尾己在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
（4）信件內(nèi)容必須寫(xiě)在答題卡指定的位置上．

小鎮(zhèn)概況	Hartwell，人口約5000，"澳洲最美小鎮(zhèn)"之一
過(guò)去狀況	當(dāng)?shù)厝硕�天燃木取暖，引起空氣污染，�?shù)木被伐
應(yīng)對(duì)措施	立法阻止此類(lèi)活動(dòng)，鼓勵(lì)使用清潔能源
感想建議	…．

參考詞匯：
澳洲最美小鎮(zhèn)（Australia's Nicest Towns）    清潔能源（clean energy）

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇根據(jù)圖表所給信息來(lái)寫(xiě)的應(yīng)用文．本文要求從四個(gè)方面去寫(xiě)：小鎮(zhèn)概況；過(guò)去狀況；應(yīng)對(duì)措施；感想建議．書(shū)寫(xiě)"小鎮(zhèn)概況"采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；書(shū)寫(xiě)"過(guò)去狀況，應(yīng)對(duì)措施"采用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；書(shū)寫(xiě)"感想建議"可采用"I think we can/could/should do…Why not do…？Let's do…"等句型．

解答 參考范文：Dear Editor，
   I'm a student of Sydney University．I am living in a small town called Hartwell with a population of around 5，000．It is one of the"Australia's Nicest Town"．but things were very different in the past．The local people used to burn wood to keep their houses warm in winter．That caused serious air pollution and a lot of trees were cut down．Laws were soon made to stop this and people were encouraged to use clean energy．The air is becoming better and better．I think we can do something similar in China．Perhaps we could start with using less oil．It's also a good idea to make the public transportation betterI believe we can make our world a better，greener，cleaner place if we make big decisions to keep trying．
  Yours sincerely，
   Jason Wu

點(diǎn)評(píng) 此題為圖表作文，看到考題后，先不要急于動(dòng)筆，要仔細(xì)看清題目要求的內(nèi)容．根據(jù)圖表提供的資料和信息來(lái)審題，在自己的頭腦中構(gòu)思出一個(gè)框架，把所給信息條理清楚的表達(dá)出來(lái)，審題要確定格式文體、主體時(shí)態(tài)、主要句型等．