Question

9．為傳承荊楚文化，你校自2014年9月以來(lái)積極開展讀書活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇短文，介紹你的閱讀情況、你的收獲、你的后期打算及對(duì)學(xué)校今后開展閱讀活動(dòng)的建議．
  寫作提示：

你的閱讀情況	①經(jīng)常利用閱讀課和課余時(shí)間來(lái)閱讀，堅(jiān)持每天閱讀一小時(shí)； ②閱讀了一些中國(guó)優(yōu)秀的傳統(tǒng)作品，還有一些有關(guān)荊門歷史名勝的書刊； ③堅(jiān)持了做好讀書筆記
你的閱讀收獲	①了解了荊門歷史文化 ②欣賞了豐富的中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文學(xué)藝術(shù)與語(yǔ)言
你的后期打算	保持自己的閱讀習(xí)慣；閱讀更對(duì)的中國(guó)優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)作品
你對(duì)學(xué)校的建議	每學(xué)期至少開展一次有關(guān)傳統(tǒng)文化教育的活動(dòng)

參考詞匯：traditional；works（作品）；ancient；readingclass；keep；note；wonderful；literature（文學(xué)）；inherit（傳承）．
  寫作要求：
  1．以上提示必須寫出，并可結(jié)合自己的閱讀實(shí)際情況適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容；
  2．不得少于100詞（已給出的不計(jì)入在內(nèi)）
  3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名
In order to accept the Chinese traditional education，and inherit the cuture about Jingchu，my school have had a reading activity since September，2014．
I often did some reading in the reading classes and in my free time．I kept reading for at least one hour every day．As for the books，I red some great works about the Chinese tradtion，and some books abut Jingmen's history and places of interest．When I read，I kept taking sme notes．
From the reading，I learned a lot about Jingmen's history and cuture．And I enjoyed the rich art and language of the literature．
Aithough I have read some books，I will keep my own habit of reading and I will do more reading on China's traditionaal wors．I think it's good for me．Also，I suggest that my school should have at least one activity about our tradtional education．Let more students take an active part in the reading and know more about our country．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是介紹你的閱讀情況、你的收獲、你的后期打算及對(duì)學(xué)校今后開展閱讀活動(dòng)的建議．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1你的閱讀情況①經(jīng)常利用閱讀課和課余時(shí)間來(lái)閱讀，堅(jiān)持每天閱讀一小時(shí)；②閱讀了一些中國(guó)優(yōu)秀的傳統(tǒng)作品，還有一些有關(guān)荊門歷史名勝的書刊；③堅(jiān)持了做好讀書筆記
2你的閱讀收獲①了解了荊門歷史文化②欣賞了豐富的中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文學(xué)藝術(shù)與語(yǔ)言
3你的后期打算：保持自己的閱讀習(xí)慣；閱讀更對(duì)的中國(guó)優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)作品
4你對(duì)學(xué)校的建議：每學(xué)期至少開展一次有關(guān)傳統(tǒng)文化教育的活動(dòng)
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
in order to 為了…
keep doing sth 堅(jiān)持做某事
take notes 記筆記
be good for 對(duì)…有益
at least 至少
take part in 參加
【高分句型】
1．①In order to accept the Chinese traditional education，and inherit the cuture about Jingchu，my school have had a reading activity②since September，2014．
①in order to 為了…，做目的狀語(yǔ)．
②since自從，做時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，經(jīng)常用于現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)．
2．①When I read，I ②kept taking some notes．
①when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句
②keep doing sth 堅(jiān)持做某事
3．Although I have read some books，I will keep my own habit of reading and I will do more reading on China's traditional works．
although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，意為"雖然，盡管"．

解答 In order to accept the Chinese traditional education，and inherit the cuture about Jingchu，my school have had a reading activity since September，2014．【高分句型】
   I often did some reading in the reading classes and in my free time．I kept reading for at least one hour every day．As for the books，I red some great works about the Chinese tradtion，and some books about Jingmen's history and places of interest．When I read，I kept taking some notes．【高分句型】（我的閱讀情況）
   From the reading，I learned a lot about history and cuture．And I enjoyed the rich art and language of the literature．（我的閱讀收獲）
   Although I have read some books，I will keep my own habit of reading and I will do more reading on China's traditional works．【高分句型】I think it's good for me．（我的后期打算）Also，I suggest that my school should have at least one activity about our tradtional education．Let more students take an active part in the reading and know more about our country．（對(duì)學(xué)校的建議）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇書面表達(dá)應(yīng)根據(jù)提綱內(nèi)容寫一篇短文閱讀的現(xiàn)狀和收獲以及今后打算．選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)．文章銜接連貫，文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，脈絡(luò)清晰．同時(shí)，本文中運(yùn)用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少．