Question

3．假如你是李冰，你美國(guó)的筆友Mike遇到了一個(gè)難題，發(fā)郵件向你求助．請(qǐng)回封郵件，寫(xiě)出個(gè)人看法，并提出解決問(wèn)題的建議．
注意：開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

Dear Li Bing， I'm so sad．This morning on my way home I saw an old man lying on the ground．He was badly hurt．I quickly took him to the hospital．But his daughter thought it was me hurt his father and she said many dirty words and was very angry with me…I don't know whether I will help others in the future？Can you help me？ Yours， Mike

Dear Mike，
I have received your e-mail recently．I can understand you．I think you are right．I hope you can help others as possible as you can．【高分句型一】I can give you some advice．（開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題）
First when you meet such things，you'd better call 110 to ask the policeman for help．Besides you should try to explain to his daughter，I think maybe she didn't know the reason and was justtoo worried．What's more，don't think more about that．I think you did right，sooner or later she will understand you and thank you．（提出建議）
I hope you can go on helping people in trouble．If everyone can give a hand to others，the world will become more and more beautiful．【高分句型二】（再次闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)）．
I wish you are happy all the time!
Yours，
Li Bing．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I hope you can help others as possible as you can．
句中"you can help others as possible as you can"為賓語(yǔ)從句，句中"as possible as you can"意為"盡可能地…"．這句話意為：我希望你可以盡可能地幫助別人．
高分句型二：
If everyone can give a hand to others，the world will become more and more beautiful．
句中"If everyone can give a hand to others"為條件狀語(yǔ)從句，句中短語(yǔ)有"give a hand to sb 幫助某人"、"比較級(jí)+and+比較級(jí)  越來(lái)越…"．這句話意為：如果每個(gè)人都能幫助別人，這個(gè)世界會(huì)變得越來(lái)越美好．

解答 Dear Mike，
    I have received your e-mail recently．I can understand you．I think you are right．I hope you can help others as possible as you can．【高分句型一】I can give you some advice．（開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題）
    First when you meet such things，you'd better call 110 to ask the policeman for help．Besides you should try to explain to his daughter，I think maybe she didn't know the reason and  was just too worried．What's more，don't think more about that．I think you did right，sooner or later she will understand you and thank you．（提出建議）
    I hope you can go on helping people in trouble．If everyone can give a hand to others，the world will become more and more beautiful．【高分句型二】（再次闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)）
    I wish you are happy all the time!
Yours，
Li Bing

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