Question

20．請以"My dream"為題寫一篇英語作文，供英語課上交流．

Dream	I want to
Reasons	be interested in …
Ways to achieves my dream	work hard at school find out how successful people did it …

注意：1、短文必須包括三部分內(nèi)容，需要陳述理由（2條）和方式（3條）
2、表中右欄信息僅供參考，也可自由發(fā)揮；詞數(shù)80個左右
My Dream

I want to be a writer when I grow up．Writing has been part of my life．Through writing I will be able to share my ideas and make friends with others．
I can achieve my dream by reading widely and by working hard at school to learn as much as possible．It's also important to find out how successful people did it so that I could learn from them．I'm determined to hold on to my dream till one day it comes true．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是以"My dream"為題談?wù)勛约旱膲粝耄畷r態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1夢想是什么
2為什么？
3為夢想做些什么？
常用到的重點短語：
grow up 長大
share…with sb與某人分享…
make friends交朋友
as…as possible盡可能…
find out找出
hold on to 堅持
be determined to do下決心做某事
高分句型：
1．①It's also important to find out ②how successful people did it ③so that I could learn from them．
①it做形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．
②how引導(dǎo)的賓語從句作為find out的賓語．
③so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句，表目的，還可以用in order that．
2．I'①m determined to②hold on to my dream③till one day it comes true．
①be determined to do下決心做某事
②hold on to 堅持，to 是作為介詞，這個詞組后跟的一般是名詞或是名詞性短語．
③till直到，引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句．

解答 My Dream
I want to be a writer when I grow up．（夢想是什么）Writing has been part of my life．Through writing I will be able to share my ideas and make friends with others．（為什么）
I can achieve my dream by reading widely and by working hard at school to learn as much as possible．It's also important to find out how successful people did it so that I could learn from them．（高分句型）（為夢想做些什么）I'm determined to hold on to my dream till one day it comes true．（高分句型）

點評 圖表類作文寫作之前考生首先要認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．表格內(nèi)容要全部包括在作文中，詞數(shù)要符合要求．句式表達(dá)要正確，注意句子的主謂賓、主系表等結(jié)構(gòu)．文章結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰．考生在平時的英語學(xué)習(xí)中需牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理，也可為文章增色不少．