Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（15分）

目前，外出旅游已成為我們生活中的重要部分，但是在旅游過程中一些游客會(huì)有不文明的行為，包括某些隨父母旅游的中學(xué)生，作為一名中學(xué)生請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格和英語(yǔ)提示，就如何做一個(gè)文明的游客，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/span>

要求：1.字?jǐn)?shù)不少于90詞；

2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。

不文明行為	文明行為
亂扔垃圾、大聲喧嘩、亂寫亂畫……	排隊(duì)上車、買票等、尊重當(dāng)?shù)仫L(fēng)俗、聽從導(dǎo)游.….

提示詞：politely, respect, local customs, in line, relics(古跡）

Nowadays, travelling is becoming an important part of our life. But some travelers have some bad behaviors and habits while visiting some places of interest, including our middle school students.

Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays travelling is becoming an important part of our life. But some travelers have some bad behaviors and habits while visiting some places of interest, including our middle school students. Some make loud noise in public places. Others throw rubbish everywhere, and some write or draw somewhere and so on. As a middle school student, I think we should pay attention to our behaviors. Here is some advice. First, throw rubbish into dustbins and don’t write or draw on the relics. Second, Talk to others politely and don’t make noise in public places. Besides, we should wait in line when buying tickets or getting on the bus. We’d better follow guides and obey orders. At the same time, we should not only protect natural environment but also respect local customs and traditions.

【解析】

試題分析：本次作文為提綱類作文，要求根據(jù)表格和英語(yǔ)提示，就如何做一個(gè)文明的游客，談?wù)勀愕目捶?/span>。寫作提綱已經(jīng)點(diǎn)明，故要完成寫作任務(wù)，務(wù)必根據(jù)提綱把各要點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本篇范文成功地完成了寫作任務(wù)，要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。本文應(yīng)用了很多短語(yǔ)使得文章很生動(dòng)，例如Some make loud noise in public places. Others throw rubbish everywhere, and some write or draw somewhere and so on.表示順序的副詞First, Second,的應(yīng)用更使得短文表述層次更清晰。總之，該文是一篇不錯(cuò)的短文。