Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

母愛(ài)情深，學(xué)會(huì)感恩。母親節(jié)即將來(lái)臨，請(qǐng)你借此機(jī)會(huì)寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文，介紹你的母親。提示如下：

1. 母親的年齡、職業(yè)、外貌、能力和業(yè)余愛(ài)好等。

2. 母親為你做了很多事，在學(xué)習(xí)上幫助你，當(dāng)你遇到困難時(shí)，希望你能笑對(duì)生活。她工作勤奮，為了讓你們過(guò)上更好的生活。

3. 將來(lái)，你為母親做什么？現(xiàn)在你有什么打算？(可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮)

My Mother

Mother's Day is coming. I'd like to say something about my mother.

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Answer 1

【答案】

My mother

Mother's Day is coming. I would like to say something about my mother. My mother is forty-two years old. She is a worker and looks slim but energetic. My mother is good at planning things and does well in her work. She loves music and sports.

My mother has done much for me. She has help me a lot. When I have problems or trouble, she always expects me to smile to life. She works hard to make us live a better life.

What should I do for my mother in the future? I will take good care of her. I will try my best to study. I shall be kind and helpful like her. I am sure my mother will live a happy life. I LOVE MY MOTHER.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文叫小作者介紹自己的母親，給出了寫(xiě)作的提綱，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來(lái)加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如My mother is good at planning things and does well in her work. She loves music and sports.

My mother has done much for me. She has help me a lot. When I have problems or trouble, she always expects me to smile to life.等等。