Question

書面表達(dá)

假如你是班長(zhǎng)，學(xué)期結(jié)束時(shí)老師要給學(xué)生作簡(jiǎn)短的評(píng)價(jià)，你班同學(xué)楊濤這個(gè)學(xué)期來(lái)變化很大，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示用英語(yǔ)寫一篇評(píng)語(yǔ)。

注意：

1、短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫；

2、詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已給出，省略號(hào)部分須用1-2句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

Yang Tao has improved a lot this term．But ________

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Answer 1

答案：
解析：

　　Yang Tao has improved a lot this term．But in the past, he didn't study hard and often quarreled with his classmates．He liked to throw rubbish everywhere．His desk was always in a mess．He often played computer games．

　　Now he has changed greatly since his teacher had a talk with him．He tries to get along with his classmates and often helps others clean the classroom,_ mend desks and chairs, tidy their school things, when they are in trouble, etc)．As a result, his parents and teachers are satisfied with him．He hopes to get good marks in the exams．

　　(一)評(píng)分原則：

　　1．本題總分為10分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。

　　2．評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量。確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。

　　3．本題共有5個(gè)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達(dá)，后兩個(gè)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮須符合題意。

　　4．內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)遺漏、句子語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤、時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)誤用，均為大錯(cuò)。其他錯(cuò)誤(如冠詞、介詞、拼寫等方面的錯(cuò)誤)均為小錯(cuò)。3個(gè)小錯(cuò)相當(dāng)于一處大錯(cuò)。相同的錯(cuò)誤，只扣一次。

　　5．詞數(shù)少于70或多于90的，從總分中減去1分。

　　(二)各檔次的結(jié)分要求：