【題目】書面表達(dá)(共1題,計(jì)15分)

假設(shè)你是Tina,筆友Tom向你訴說了他的煩惱:他最好的朋友要過生日,他的朋友們準(zhǔn)備的禮物都很貴,可是他卻沒有足夠的錢給最好的朋友買很昂貴的禮物。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示給他寫一封回信,給他一些合理的建議。

提示:1. 買禮物并不一定必須買貴的。2. 同學(xué)應(yīng)該會(huì)理解。3. 可以買花或者自制賀卡等。

【答案】

Dear Tom,

Glad to hear from you, but I’m sorry to know that you’re so worried. In my opinion, gifts are just something to show our love. It has nothing to do with money.

I don’t think you need to buy an expensive gift, although your classmates will buy expensive gifts for him. If you buy one expensive gift, you will need too much money. And if you don’t have enough money, you have to ask your parents for money. And I don’t think it is a good idea. Why don’t you buy some flowers and make a beautiful birthday card for your best friend? That’ll be enough to mak e him happy.

Yours,

Tina

【解析】

試題分析:本篇作文素材取材于學(xué)生的生活中所遇到的困難。同學(xué)過生日,自己買不起很貴重的禮物,覺得貴重的禮物才代表著友情。這種事情在現(xiàn)在的學(xué)生中也很普遍。應(yīng)該教導(dǎo)學(xué)生平時(shí)樹立健康的價(jià)值觀。題目中給出了一些建議用來讓考生參考。會(huì)簡(jiǎn)單的翻譯,再稍微發(fā)揮,文章很容易完成。

寫作亮點(diǎn):本篇文章對(duì)書信的格式運(yùn)用正確,信的開頭和結(jié)尾嚴(yán)格按照書信的要求來寫。這是寫書信文章最先需要注意的。另外本文中句型運(yùn)用熟練。長(zhǎng)短句,簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)雜句交替使用。運(yùn)用表達(dá)恰當(dāng)。句子毫不單調(diào),顯示了作者較好的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)水平。該篇作文還有不少亮點(diǎn)詞組作為加分理由。比如說In my opinion nothing to do with 等。

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