Question

4．假如你是王明．你的朋友Nancy 最近寫信給你，她在信中提到想找一份兼職工作，但又擔(dān)心影響學(xué)習(xí)，所以想向你征求一些建議．請寫封回信談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ�要求�?br />（1）語法正確，意思連貫；
（2）80詞左右．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Nancy，
I'm glad to hear from you．                        Yours，
Wang Ming．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think a part-time job is good for you我認為兼職對你有益處．
think后是省略that的賓語從句．
【高分句型二】
However，there's something you need to pay attention to然而，有一些你需要注意的事情．
 you need to pay attention to是省略了關(guān)系詞that的定語從句．that作為從句賓語，故可以省略．

解答 Dear Nancy，
I'm glad to hear from you．I think a part-time job is good for you．【高分句型一】（贊同）On the one hand，you can get more experience in your life．On the other hand，you can get some money，with which you can do something you like．However，there's something you need to pay attention to【高分句型二】．Don't get a busy and tiring job and don't make the job take you too much time．
After all，it is a part-time activity．Remember the most important thing you should do now is to focus on your study．I believe you can deal with it successfully!（建議和看法）
Yours，
Wang Ming．

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