Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)(滿分10分)

下表是有關(guān)Tom Miller的情況介紹, 請先根據(jù)表格中的提示信息, 寫一篇介紹Tom Miller的短文, 然后再說說自己。

注意: 1. 文中應(yīng)包括表格中的所有信息;

2. 詞數(shù)60個(gè)左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);

3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和姓名。

Name		Tom Miller	I
Age/Birthday		13/December 2nd
Favorite subject		music
Favorite sport		basketball
Lunch		noodles, fish
		tomatoes
. . .		. . .

I have a good friend. His name is Tom Miller.

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Answer 1

【答案】

I have a good friend. His name is Tom Miller. He is 13 years old. His birthday is on December 2nd. He likes singing and his favorite subject is music. But I like math, it’s difficult but interesting. At school, we have lunch together. I like chicken best. He likes noodles and fish, but he doesn’t like tomatoes. After school, we usually play basketball. It’s our favorite sport. We think it’s really relaxing.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是介紹自己的朋友的情況，所以句子用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，要注意上下文句子的銜接，不要出現(xiàn)語法錯(cuò)誤。因?yàn)榫渥佑玫氖且话悻F(xiàn)在時(shí)要注意主謂一致的問題。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語幾句式，如：He likes singing and his favorite subject is music. But I like math, it’s difficult but interesting. At school, we have lunch together. I like chicken best. He likes noodles and fish, but he doesn’t like tomatoes. After school, we usually play basketball. 用了一些連詞，如and，but等，增加了文章的色彩。