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12．微笑是一種人生態(tài)度．請你以"Learn to Smile"為題，為你�！队⒄Z園地》寫一篇稿件．
內(nèi)容要點包括：
（1）學(xué)會對自己微笑；
（2）學(xué)會對他人微笑；
（3）微笑是一種語言．
注意：
（1）緊扣主題，表述全面、準(zhǔn)確、流暢；
（2）詞數(shù)：80-100；
（3）文章中不要出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名．
參考詞匯：態(tài)度attitude；自信心confidence

Learn to Smile
Smile is an attitude to life．We should face everything with smile．
In our life，there may be something unpleasant．For example，you fail in an exam； or you are misunderstood by your friends．These things may make you feel bad．Then what will you do？Why not learn to smile？Smiling to yourself can bring back your confidence and beat the unhappy feelings．Sometimes，the greatest enemy is yourself．Most important of all，smiling benefits your health．
We should also learn to smile to others，and it will help us to get closer to other people．Therefore，smile is the most widely understood language．
Let's learn to smile．I believe our world will be more wonderful and our life will be happier and happier．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文，要求是為你�！队⒄Z園地》寫一篇稿件．以"Learn to Smile"為題，寫一篇英語短文，因此人稱應(yīng)該用第一人稱和第三人稱為主，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時．
寫作思路：本文的寫作要點主要包括：（1）學(xué)會對自己微笑；（2）學(xué)會對他人微笑；（3）微笑是一種語言；
重點句型及短語：Why not do sth？為什么不…Most important of all最重要的是，learn to學(xué)會做某事，help sb to幫助某人做某事，therefore因此等

解答 答案：
Smile is an attitude to life．We should face everything with smile．
In our life，there may be something unpleasant．For example，you fail in an exam； or you are misunderstood by your friends．These things may make you feel bad．Then what will you do？Why not learn to smile？（生活中的困境）Smiling to yourself can bring back your confidence and beat the unhappy feelings．Sometimes，the greatest enemy is yourself．Most important of all，smiling benefits your health．（學(xué)會對自己微笑）（高分句型）．
We should also learn to smile to others，and it will help us to get closer to other people．（學(xué)會對他人微笑）Therefore，smile is the most widely understood language．（微笑是一種語言）
Let's learn to smile．I believe our world will be more wonderful and our life will be happier and happier（號召）（高分句型）．

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