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8．背景設(shè)定：在6月份進(jìn)行的女子世界杯亞洲區(qū)出線賽中，我們一直引以為傲的"鏗鏘玫瑰"，卻遺憾的落選，不能進(jìn)入女子世界杯總決賽．賽后的記者采訪中，女足隊員們說她們不會被擊敗，會總結(jié)自己的不足，提高自己的能力，爭取在下一次比賽中取得好的成績．假如你是小剛，請談?wù)勀阍趯W(xué)習(xí)中遇到的問題及解決的方法．

遇到的問題	（1）作業(yè)太多，休息時間太少；（2）壓力太大，厭倦學(xué)習(xí)；（3）迷失自我，易怒、易生氣
解決的辦法	（1）勞逸結(jié)合，學(xué)會放松；（2）學(xué)會溝通，釋放壓力；（3）學(xué)會學(xué)習(xí)、注重方法

要求：（1）圍繞以上內(nèi)容進(jìn)行合理表述．（2）所表述的內(nèi)容必須包含表中的六個方面．（3）文中請不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名和地名．（4）詞數(shù)不得少于80，開頭語已給出．（不計入詞數(shù)）
提示詞：too much，little，nervous，pressure，be tired of，lose，angry，relax，talk with，suggestion，make a plan，find out
Our Steel Rose lost a chance to take part in the Women's World Cup．But the player never gave up．They said they would try their best to improve themselves．
I always meet some problems in my study…
Every day I have too much homework to do，while I have too little time for rest．I feel nervous because of too much pressure．Sometimes I really tired of studying．I even don′t know what to do．I think I have lost myself．This feeling makes me angry easily．
What should I do？The players from National Women Soccer Team set a good example for me．That is"never give up"．I think I should learn how to study．First，relax myself though I have much to do．Second，talk with my parents，teachers or friends to ask them for suggestions．Maybe they can help me out of such pressure．Third，make a good plan for my study and find out my own way to learn．
In a word，I will never give up．I will regard the problem as challenges．I will try my best to make my dream come true．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)勀阍趯W(xué)習(xí)中遇到的問題及解決的方法．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1遇到的問題（1）作業(yè)太多，休息時間太少；（2）壓力太大，厭倦學(xué)習(xí)；（3）迷失自我，易怒、易生氣
2解決的辦法：（1）勞逸結(jié)合，學(xué)會放松；（2）學(xué)會溝通，釋放壓力；（3）學(xué)會學(xué)習(xí)、注重方法

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
because of 因?yàn)椤?br />be tired of…厭倦…
make sb do sth讓某人做某事
talk with sb 與…交流
make a plan 制定計劃
find out 找出
in a word 總之
try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事

高分句型：
1． Every day I have too much homework ①to do，②while I have too little time for rest．
①動詞不定式to do 做后置定語，修飾前面的homework，非謂語動詞的運(yùn)用．
②While作并列連詞用，意思為"而，然而"，表前后兩種情況的對比．
2．First，relax myself though I have much to do．
though連詞，表示雖然，引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句，不能和but連用．

解答 Our Steel Rose lost a chance to take part in the Women's World Cup．But the player never gave up．They said they would try their best to improve themselves．
I always meet some problems in my study．Every day I have too much homework to do，while I have too little time for rest．（高分句型）（作業(yè)太多，休息時間太少）I feel nervous because of too much pressure．Sometimes I really tired of studying．（壓力太大，厭倦學(xué)習(xí)）I even don′t know what to do．I think I have lost myself．This feeling makes me angry easily．（迷失自我，易怒、易生氣）
What should I do？The players from National Women Soccer Team set a good example for me．That is"never give up"．I think I should learn how to study．First，relax myself though I have much to do．（高分句型）（勞逸結(jié)合，學(xué)會放松）Second，talk with my parents，teachers or friends to ask them for suggestions．Maybe they can help me out of such pressure（學(xué)會溝通，釋放壓力）．Third，make a good plan for my study and find out my own way to learn．（學(xué)會學(xué)習(xí)、注重方法）
In a word，I will never give up．I will regard the problem as challenges．I will try my best to make my dream come true．

點(diǎn)評 逐詞逐句地進(jìn)行翻譯，所寫句子要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．
以提綱提供情景的作文．要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個提綱的要點(diǎn)．行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句．在作文完成的時候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)．