Question

【題目】 書面表達(dá)（15分））

最近你和你的同學(xué)就“中學(xué)生目前存在的問(wèn)題”展開了討論。 現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你以此為話題， 參照表內(nèi)提供的信息，寫一篇短文。

Problems	Causes	Advice
1.argue with parents	--------	have a talk with parents, understand each other
2.can’t sleep well before exams	anxious about grades	--------
3.feel lonely	-------	--------

注意：

開頭部分已寫好，你只需接著寫。

所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的信息，和你所補(bǔ)全的信息。

詞數(shù)：不少于80個(gè)。

Recently I’ve had a discussion with my classmates about our problems.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Recently I’ve had a discussion with my classmates about our problems.

Some of my classmates say they often argue with their parents. That is because their parents always ask them to study and they feel they have no free time to do what they like. If they have a talk with their parents, they can understand each other.

Some say they can’t sleep well before exams because they are anxious about the grades. They should take a long walk to relax before going to bed.

Some also say they feel lonely because they don't know how to make friends. As the only kid in the family, students should take part in some after-school activities and learn to communicate with others.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇讓小作者介紹中學(xué)生目前存在的問(wèn)題，問(wèn)題出現(xiàn)的原因及其解決問(wèn)題的建議。小作者把自己的觀點(diǎn)介紹的比較清楚。另外，寫作時(shí)，小作者還注意了語(yǔ)句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。作者寫的這些內(nèi)容也比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如That is because their parents always ask them to study and they feel they have no free time to do what they like. If they have a talk with their parents, they can understand each other.