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4．2014年春節(jié)聯歡晚會上，王錚亮的一曲《時間都去哪兒了？》，讓很多人悵然于時光的流逝．請根據以下提示，以How do we make good use of our time？為題，談談你如何安排自己的時間．詞數：80詞左右．
Things you should spend more time on：
1．Exercising every day to keep healthy；
2．Spending time with your family；
3．Making plans for your future；
4．Giving help to others；
5．Playing for fun and enjoyinfg life；
6．Reading good books．
How do we make good use of our time？
（時間的重要性）Time is important to everyone．We need to make good use of it．Here are some things we should spend more time on．
（陪伴家人）First of all，we should spend more time with our family．It's our family who will support us whenever we are in difficulty．（閱讀）Reading good books is also an important thing．（鍛煉保持健康）Besides，we should exercise every day to keep healthy．Only when we are in good health will we be able to achieve our dreams．（計劃將來）Of course，to make our dreams come true，more time needs to be spent in planning for our future．（開心生活）In addition，never forget to spend some time playing for fun，life should be full of happiness．（幫助他人）Helping others can bring you happiness as well．
If we can make good use of our time，life will be more colorful and meaningful．．

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分析 本文是一篇提綱作文，要求是根據以下提示，以How do we make good use of our time？為題，談談如何安排自己的時間，根據提示，可知道一些如何花費時間的方式與做法，人稱應該是第一人稱，時態(tài)用一般現在時和一般將來時，要盡可能地使用can，could，should等情態(tài)動詞來表達建議．重點短語及句型make good use of，spend more time on，Besides，In addition，be full of等等

解答 How do we make good use of our time？
（時間的重要性）Time is important to everyone．We need to make good use of it．Here are some things we should spend more time on．
（陪伴家人）First of all，we should spend more time with our family．It's our family who will support us whenever we are in difficulty．（閱讀）Reading good books is also an important thing．（鍛煉保持健康）Besides，we should exercise every day to keep healthy．Only when we are in good health will we be able to achieve our dreams．（計劃將來）Of course，to make our dreams come true，more time needs to be spent in planning for our future．（開心生活）In addition，never forget to spend some time playing for fun，life should be full of happiness．（幫助他人）Helping others can bring you happiness as well．
If we can make good use of our time，life will be more colorful and meaningful．

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