Question

14．你有了夢想，可這個夢想和你父母的愿望不一致，你將如何與父母溝通？請根據(jù)以下提示給你父母寫一封信．

要求：1）80詞左右（文中已給出部分不計入總次數(shù)，不必抄寫到答題卡上．）
              2）提示詞必須全部用上，并適當發(fā)揮
              3）注意行文流暢，不必逐句翻譯
參考詞匯：active； smart； do better in； both…and…
Dear Mum and Dad，
Thank you very much for taking care of me for years，I have grown up to be an active and smart boy．I am good at playing basketball and I want to be a basketball player when I grow up，you know my favorite basketball player is Yao Ming．I used to spend too much time on it，so I was weak in my study．You were very angry，I am sorry．from now on，I will try my best to do better in both my study and basketball．Believe me and you will be proud of me one day．I am so thankful for your love．
       I'm so thankful for you love．
                                                                                                                Yours，
                                                                                                                lovely．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
I am good at playing basketball and I want to be a basketball player when I grow up． 我擅長打籃球，長大后我想當一名籃球運動員．這是when引導的時間狀語從句，當…時候．
高分句型二
I will try my best to do better in both my study and basketball．我會盡最大努力在學習和籃球方面做得更好．try one's best to do sth．盡某人最大的努力做某事，do better in做的更好． both…and…兩個都…．

解答 Dear mum and dad，
Thank you very much for taking care of me for years，【要點一，向父母表示感謝】I have grown up to be an active and smart boy．I am good at playing basketball and I want to be a basketball player when I grow up【高分句型一，注意時間狀語從句的使用】，you know my favorite basketball player is Yao Ming【要點二，說明自己的夢想】．I used to spend too much time on it，so I was weak in my study．You were very angry，I am sorry．from now on，I will try my best to do better in both my study and basketball【高分句型二，注意固定詞組的使用】．Believe me and you will be proud of me one day．【要點三，表明決心】I am so thankful for your love．
Yours，
lovely．

點評 本文屬于看圖說話類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析圖畫所要表達的意思，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題．平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．