Question

15．假如你是LinLing，學(xué)校根據(jù)表中新西蘭來溫暑期交流師生的意愿，決定安排他們?nèi)?00公里外的許村游玩一天．但自行車來回路程需要8--9小時(shí)，權(quán)衡利弊，需調(diào)整這項(xiàng)內(nèi)容，請你發(fā)郵件給對方帶隊(duì)老師Mr．Black做好說明、溝通工作．

A One-day Tour
Preferred activity	□Learn about Chinese education □See beautiful sights √□Learn about Chinese culture	Your idea √□No □Yes→What is it？
Preferred Place	□A school √□A village □A museum
Preferred transportation	□On foot √□By bike □By bus
Other needs	□No √□Yes→What is it？Tasto some local food

要求：（1）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名等相關(guān)信息；
（2）文本長度：110詞左右．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不記人總詞數(shù)）
Dear Mrblack．
I'm Lingting．My school asked us to make the one-day tour plan for you and we tried to make it best to your preterences，but I'm afraid we'll have to make some changes．
      ．
Locking torward to your reply．
Best wishes．
Lingling
小詞典：

adapt v．改編	beg v．懇求	cancer n．癌癥
cell n．＜生＞細(xì)胞	defence n．防御	fort n．堡壘
inspect v．檢查	jaw n．下巴	pray v．祈禱
publish v．出版	recognise v．識(shí)別	version n．版本

Answer 1

分析 此題要求寫一封電子郵件．時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語，句式等問題．題中包含了這些要點(diǎn)：①將要去的地方；②交通方式即游覽的地方；③自己的觀點(diǎn)．注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，句子要通順連貫，沒有語法錯(cuò)誤．
1．高分句型
We'll visit a mountain village called Xuecun，which is very famous for its old houses，fantastic sights and delicious food．我們要去參觀一個(gè)叫做薛村的山村，這里因老房子，迷人的景色和美味的食物而聞名．這是which引導(dǎo)的一個(gè)定語從句，be famous for因…而聞名．
2．高分句型
So we think taking a bus there will be a much better choice．因此，我們認(rèn)為乘公共汽車將是一個(gè)更好的選擇．
這是一個(gè)動(dòng)名詞在賓語從句中作主語的句子，taking a bus there will be a much better choice在句子中為賓語從句，動(dòng)名詞 taking a bus there 在賓語從句中是主語．

解答 Dear Mrblack．
   I'm Lingting．My school asked us to make the one-day tour plan for you and we tried to make it best to your preterences，but I'm afraid we'll have to make some changes．
   We'll visit a mountain village called Xuecun，which is very famous for its old houses，fantastic sights and delicious food．I'm sure you will like it．【要點(diǎn)一】
   However，it will take us about 8 to 9 hours to go and come back by bike．Even if we set out at 7：00a．m．，we'll get there at about 11：30．Going around the beautiful，cultural places，inculding some old houses all with a history of over 500 years，it will take us at least 2 to 3 hours．Having lunch takes another hour．【要點(diǎn)二】What's more，it's very hot here in summer．So we think taking a bus there will be a much better choice．【要點(diǎn)三】
Locking torward to your reply．
Best wishes．
Lingling

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，多閱讀此類題材，將詞匯歸類整理；動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞．寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞，如but，so，then等．