Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)。

下面是李雷的個(gè)人檔案，請(qǐng)根據(jù)檔案的內(nèi)容對(duì)他做一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)介。

Name：Li Lei Age：14 Likes：basketball，swimming，drawing，music Favorite Star：Michael Jordan Favorite food：fish and chips Appearance：short and straight hair，big eyes，medium height Wants：a basketball player

I have a good friend.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

I have a good friend. His name is Li Lei. He is 14 years old. He is tall and has straight hair. He has big eyes and he is of medium height. He likes playing basketball and swimming. He is good at drawing and he likes to listen to music. His favorite star is Michael Jordan. He wants to be a basketball player. He loves fish and chips. He thinks they are delicious. We often have fun together.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的朋友李雷。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)為單數(shù)第三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：His name is…，He is..., He has..., He likes..., His favorite star is....,He wants to be....等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意在文后表達(dá)我和李雷在一起玩得高興。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我的朋友的名字，接下來(lái)介紹他的姓名，長(zhǎng)相，洗好，最后介紹我們?cè)谝黄鹜娴酶吲d。此處like doing sth, play basketball, be good at, like to do sth, want to do sth, have fun等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。