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4．今年四月份，樂清市啟動了"文明餐桌行動"，號召全體市民"文明用餐，節(jié)儉惜福"．請結(jié)合圖片，聯(lián)系實際，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以"Save Food and Eat Healthily"為題，寫一篇80-100詞的英語短文．文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)


                  Save Food And Eat Healthily
Yueqing government（政府） has called on all the citizens to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy our happy life．We middle school students should do something for it．
To save food，weshouldn't waste any of our food．Wasting too much is quite common nowadays．The food that people didn't eat up in the restaurants is just poured or dropped in the trash bins，which is a serious waste．Instead，we are supposed to eat up all the food in our plates so that we can save both food and our own money．Besides，junk food is something popular among young people．In fact，it really does harm to our health．So it's really necessary for us to eat a balanced diet．Only when we eat healthily，can we be energetic enough to study and work well．
All in all，keeping a good habit in eating is something necessary for us to do，which can save food and make us eat healthily．So，let's do it from now!．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內(nèi)容是說明圖片中所陳述的現(xiàn)象，說明浪費現(xiàn)象很嚴重，然后說明我們改如何做．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．描述圖畫；浪費太多，吃光食物，吃垃圾食物，飲食平衡
2．我們該怎么做；
 
常用到的重點短語：
eat up 吃光
be supposed to 應(yīng)該
do harm to 對…有害
all in all 總之

【高分句型】
1．The food ①that people didn't eat up in the restaurants is just poured or dropped in the trash bins，②which is a serious waste．
①that作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，修飾先行詞the food，that作為從句的賓語．
②which引導(dǎo)的非限制定語從句，修飾前面的整個句子．
2．Instead，we ①are supposed to eat up all the food in our plates②so that we can save ③both food and our own money．
①be supposed to do sth 應(yīng)該做某事
②so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句．
③both…and…兩者都
3．①Only when we eat healthily，can we be②energetic enough to study and work well．
①only+從句放句首引起倒裝．
②adj+enough to do sth 足夠怎樣做某事

解答 Save Food And Eat Healthily
    Yueqing government（政府） has called on all the citizens to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy our happy life．We middle school students should do something for it．
To save food，we shouldn't waste any of our food．Wasting too much is quite common nowadays．The food that people didn't eat up in the restaurants is just poured or dropped in the trash bins，which is a serious waste．【高分句型】Instead，we are supposed to eat up all the food in our plates so that we can save both food and our own money．【高分句型】Besides，junk food is something popular among young people．In fact，it really does harm to our health．So it's really necessary for us to eat a balanced diet．Only when we eat healthily，can we be energetic enough to study and work well．【高分句型】（描述圖畫）
All in all，keeping a good habit in eating is something necessary for us to do，which can save food and make us eat healthily．So，let's do it from now!（我們該怎么做）

點評 本文的寫作首先說明圖片中所陳述的現(xiàn)象，說明浪費現(xiàn)象很嚴重，然后說明我們改如何做we are supposed to eat up all the food in our plates so that we can save both food and our own money．然后對青少年喜歡吃垃圾食品進行陳述，說明我們應(yīng)該有平衡額飲食eat a balanced diet．最后進行總結(jié)，號召大家一起現(xiàn)在就行動起來let's do it from now!
初中英語的作文，著重考察學(xué)生連詞成句的能力，要在"準"字上下功夫．在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動詞時態(tài)等諸多方面．在對所出現(xiàn)的問題或是采取的措施描寫中注意使用連詞或是好的句式如have a  far-reaching effect on sth對…有深遠的影響，only 置于句首的倒裝及only when …，can we…等．對于中學(xué)作文的寫作，盡量將所學(xué)的知識運用到作文中，寫出富于變化、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊的文章，不要出現(xiàn)中式英文．在平時的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對于寫的好的句子進行默寫，考試時就能寫出準確地道的作文．