Question

【題目】書面表達

提示：假如，Simon Li， 8年級的學生。上周聽了一個動物協(xié)會主席的有關(guān)動物的報告，決定申請加入動物保護協(xié)會，請根據(jù)下列提示，寫一份80左右的申請信。

1. 自我介紹，8年級的學生，各門功課都很優(yōu)秀。喜歡各類動物。

2. 加入理由：人類不斷地砍伐樹木, 再加上獵人的捕殺，結(jié)果，動物的生存空間越來越少，動物數(shù)量變得越來越少。希望能為保護動物做些事情。

3. 假如能加入俱樂部，將非常高興。

4. 聯(lián)系方式：電話：63908 電子郵件：Simon LI@sina.com.

5. 開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總數(shù)。

Dear Chairperson，

I listened to your talk about animals last week. Now I’m writing to you I’d like to join the Animal Protection First, let me

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Look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours Sincerely

Simon Li

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Chairperson，

I listened to your talk about animals last week. Now I’m writing to you . I’d like to join the Animal Protection Society.

First, let me introduce myself. I’m Simon Li. I’m good at all the subjects and I like all kinds of animals.

People keep cutting down forests. Moreover, hunters kill them. As a result, they have fewer and fewer living areas (less and less living space).Their number is getting smaller and smaller. Animal are in danger now. I hope to act to help them.

I’ll be very happy if I can be a member of the club. You can call me on 63908 or email me at Simon LI@sina.com.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon！

Yours Sincerely,

Simon Li

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

寫作亮點：這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。