Question

【題目】下面四幅圖畫描述了你某天放學后發(fā)生的一件事。請你根據(jù)這些圖畫提示，展開合理想象，用英語寫一篇日記，時間是2012年5月11日，星期五，天氣預報：有雨。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)90左右。日記的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

2．要點完整、層次清晰、語法正確、上下文連貫。

3．文中不得使用真實的人名、校名。

May 11, 2012 Friday rainy

This afternoon, when I walked out of school, the weather changed.

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Answer 1

【答案】

May 11, 2012 Friday rainy

This afternoon, when I walked out of school, the weather changed. There were thick dark clouds in the sky. I began to feel worried because I didn’t bring an umbrella or raincoat with me when I left home in the morning. It soon started to rain. When I was hurrying home, I heard someone calling me from behind. I turned round and saw it was Li Ping. He had an umbrella and asked me to share it with him. He walked all the way with me until I got home. How thankful I was for his kindness!

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本題材料是四幅圖畫。動筆前應認真看圖，了解圖畫內容，展開合理想象。然后根據(jù)材料內容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關鍵單詞等問題。根據(jù)內容可知本文人稱以第三人稱較多，時態(tài)一般應該用一般過去時。

寫作亮點：短文多次使用主從復合句，為文章增色不少，如：This afternoon, when I walked out of school, the weather changed. He walked all the way with me until I got home.等等。