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6．假如你是方芳，你打算在端午節(jié)那天邀請(qǐng)你的美國(guó)外教Amy與你一起踏青．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給她寫(xiě)一封電子郵件．
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
（1）介紹端午節(jié)的歷史（2000多年，紀(jì)念屈原）．
（2）介紹踏青的具體事項(xiàng)．
集合時(shí)間：6月20日上午8點(diǎn)
踏青地點(diǎn)：松花江畔
交通方式：乘坐12路公交車
（3）向Amy講述中國(guó)人是如何度過(guò)端午節(jié)的（要寫(xiě)出具體的行為）．
寫(xiě)作要求：
（1）不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名．
（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫．
（3）字跡工整，語(yǔ)言精練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清晰．
（4）至少80詞．
參考詞匯：端午節(jié)the Dragon Boat Festival 踏青 go outing
Dear Amy，
It's with the great pleasure that I write to you to express my invitation．The Dragon Boat Festival has a history of more than 2000 years．It is to commemorate the great poet Qu Yuan who is known by everyone in China．Qu yuan，see their country was aggression，heart ached，but always cannot bear to part with their own motherland，in wrote in his"sand"later，bouldering miluo river body death，in his own life wrote a song of magnificent patriotic movement．Since then people will eat"zong zi"and dragon-boat racing on May 5 every year．
Let's meet at songhuajiangpan at 8am 20th June．We can take the No.12 bus to there．On that day，we will go climbing the Mountain．Then we will have a picnic on the top of the mountain．After that，we will go to visit the plants garden．And take out some food．If you want you can take out your camera．We will have a great time on that day．
I do hope that you will be able to come．
Yours，
Fangfang．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
It is to commemorate the great poet Qu Yuan who is known by everyone in China．它是為了紀(jì)念偉大的詩(shī)人屈原每一個(gè)中國(guó)人都知道．
who引導(dǎo)的定于從句
be known by 表示被所有人知道、認(rèn)識(shí)．
句型二：
If you want you can take out your camera．如果你想要你可以帶上你的相機(jī)．
if引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句．
take out把…帶出去

解答 TDear Amy，
It's with the great pleasure that I write to you to express my invitation．
The Dragon Boat Festival has a history of more than 2000 years．It is to commemorate the great poet Qu Yuan who is known by everyone in China．【高分句型一】Qu yuan，see their country was aggression，heart ached，but always cannot bear to part with their own motherland，in wrote in his"sand"later，bouldering miluo river body death，in his own life wrote a song of magnificent patriotic movement．Since then people will eat"zong zi"and dragon-boat racing on May 5 every year．（中國(guó)人如何過(guò)端午節(jié)）
Let's meet at songhuajiangpan at 8am 20th June．We can take the No.12 bus to there．On that day，we will go climbing the Mountain．Then we will have a picnic on the top of the mountain．After that，we will go to visit the plants garden．（踏青事項(xiàng)）And take out some food．If you want you can take out your camera．【高分句型二】We will have a great time on that day．
I do hope that you will be able to come．
Yours，
Fangfang．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫(xiě)作主要考查學(xué)生綜合運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言的能力，涉及學(xué)生的詞匯量，正確運(yùn)用單詞的能力，對(duì)所學(xué)語(yǔ)法的掌握程度，能否按照英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣正確表達(dá)所要表達(dá)的意思的能力等等．