Question

12．假定今天是六月十六日（星期六，天氣晴朗），你和朋友去沙湖游玩．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面所給內(nèi)容提示寫一篇日記，記錄本次活動(dòng)并簡(jiǎn)要談?wù)劯惺埽?br />1．內(nèi)容提示
到達(dá)：上午九點(diǎn)
活動(dòng)：乘船觀鳥(niǎo)島，騎馬，蹋球，游泳，吃午飯，唱歌，做游戲
返回：下午三點(diǎn)半
2．寫作要求
（1）詞數(shù)80左右，已給出的句子不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；
（3）緊扣要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
Saturday，June 16                                                          Sunny
  Today my friends and I went to the Sand Lake．

Answer 1

分析 本題是一篇提綱作文，內(nèi)容是假定今天是六月十六日（星期六，天氣晴朗），你和朋友去沙湖游玩．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面所給內(nèi)容提示寫一篇日記，記錄本次活動(dòng)并簡(jiǎn)要談?wù)劯惺�，因此時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該是一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱應(yīng)該是第一人稱，寫作內(nèi)容包括：1．到達(dá)的時(shí)間．2．參加的活動(dòng)（乘船觀鳥(niǎo)島，騎馬，蹋球，游泳，吃午飯，唱歌，做游戲）3．返回的時(shí)間．還要補(bǔ)充自己的感受，讓文章更飽滿．

解答 Saturday，June 16                                                          Sunny
    Today my friends and I went to the Sand Lake．When we arrived at nine，we first took a boat to visit the Birds Island．We saw lots of beautiful birds there．Then we came to the other side of the lake．We rode horses and played football for about
one hour．After that，we went swimming in the lake．It was cool and comfortable．At about twelve o'clock，we had a simple
lunch by the lake．When lunch was over，we sang songs and played games．We started to go back at half past three，We had a
wonderful time．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文是一篇給材料作文，短文的格式已經(jīng)給出．本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡(jiǎn)略，動(dòng)筆前先要圍繞這些要點(diǎn)組織材料，將這些要點(diǎn)全部表達(dá)出來(lái)，由于是寫一篇日記，因此寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，同時(shí)還要注意補(bǔ)充自己的感受．