Question

【題目】現(xiàn)在很多同學(xué)都有許多不良習(xí)慣。例如，經(jīng)常吃零食、 不愛運動、亂扔垃圾、不講衛(wèi)生等等。這些都是極其不好的習(xí)慣，對身體有大的危害。請你寫一篇短文，指出害處并提出有利于健康的好習(xí)慣。不少于80 詞。

1．要點完整、層次清晰、語法正確、上下文連貫。

2．文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。

Answer 1

【答案】

Now many students have had habits. They eat too many snacks and they dislikes sports. They throw litter here and there. They don’t protect the environment at all. These habits are bad. They are also bad for their health. If you eat too many snacks before meals, you will not feel like eating any food .Then you will be ill. So stop eating snacks. We should eat more vegetables and fruit and take more exercise. If we do so, we'll be healthier and happier.

【解析】

試題分析：我們首先應(yīng)該確定用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，本文應(yīng)用第一人稱。靈活采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。最后必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

寫作亮點：本文時態(tài)使用準確，敘事流暢，內(nèi)容表達清晰，使用了不少固定結(jié)構(gòu)，如：be bad for, not at all, here and there等。文中還使用then, so, if等詞使文章內(nèi)容連貫, 語言流暢，最后條件狀語從句的使用十分恰當。