Question

9．健康是人生的一筆財(cái)富，請(qǐng)以"A Healthy Lifestyle"為題從健康飲食、體育鍛煉   和養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣等方面寫一篇短文，要求請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格的內(nèi)容提示，并將答案填寫在答題卡對(duì)應(yīng)題號(hào)的橫線上．
要求：1．語句完整，意思連貫，語法正確．
2．字?jǐn)?shù)80個(gè)詞左右．
3．可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．

1	food	more vegetables，fruit，less meat…
2	exercise	do more exercise，take a walk，play ball games…
3	good habits	go to bed early，keep away from computer games…

A Healthy Lifestyle．
                                                          

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
On the other hand doing exercise is another good way to keep us healthy．另一方面，做運(yùn)動(dòng)是保持健康的另一個(gè)好方法． doing exercise 是動(dòng)名詞，在這做主語．
高分句型二
You had better not smoke and drink alcohol and you should get plenty of sleep．你最好不要抽煙喝酒，你應(yīng)該有充足的睡眠．had better not do sth．最好不要做某事．

解答 A Healthy Lifestyle
Healthy Lifestyle is very important to us．Everyone wants to live a healthy life．【開篇點(diǎn)明主題】
On the one hand，healthy diet does good to our body，and more and more people like vegetables and fruit as well as rice．We must have breakfast，lunch and supper on time and eat little snack．On the other hand doing exercise is another good way to keep us healthy【高分句型一，注意動(dòng)名詞做主語的使用】．Exercise makes you strong．Besides the above，you should avoid unhealthy habits．You had better not smoke and drink alcohol and you should get plenty of sleep【高分句型二，注意had better句型的使用】．It is a good habit to get up early with less staying up．【正文部分詳細(xì)介紹如何保持良好的生活習(xí)慣】
On the whole，don't take your good health today for granted．Take care of our body from today on．【結(jié)尾部分緊扣主題】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，多閱讀此類題材，將詞匯歸類整理；動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞．寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．