Question

【題目】 書面表達(dá)

假設(shè)上周末你和父母去北京游玩。請根據(jù)下面的提示，以A trip to Beijing為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文（標(biāo)題已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。

A trip to Beijing

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Answer 1

【答案】A trip to Beijing

Last weekend my parents and I went to Beijing by plane. We climbed the Great Wall and took lots of photos there. The Wall is about 6,700 kilometres long, and 4-5 metres wide. It’s wide enough for five horses or ten men to walk side by side. “He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a real man.” I’m proud that I’ve climbed the Great Wall. During the trip we also ate Beijing Duck. We really had a good time in Beijing. I hope I can visit it again some day.

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文，以A trip to Beijing為題，介紹自己和父母上周末去北京游玩。

結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：We climbed……，The Wall is……，It’s……，I hope……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。