Question

【題目】書面表達

即將成為一名高中生的你，應(yīng)該怎樣完善自己呢？請你以“How to be an excellent student”為題，寫一篇英語短文。

短文要點：

1.遵守校紀校規(guī)（按時到校，嚴謹吸煙）。

2.養(yǎng)成良好的學習習慣（上課認真聽講、課后復習、學會放松等）。

3.與人溝通、學會分享、互相幫助。

4.在家為父母做些力所能及的家務(wù)活（如洗碗、打掃衛(wèi)生等）。

5.保護環(huán)境、積極參與志愿者工作。

要求：

1.詞數(shù)：80-100詞。文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總數(shù)。

2.必須包括全部要點，但不能逐詞翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮。

How to be an excellent student

I am going to be a senior high school student.

I believe I will be an excellent student.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

How to be an excellent student

I am going to be a high school student.

At first I must obey the school rules. I will go to school on time and I will not smoke. As a high school student,it is important to have good study habbits. I should listen to the teacher carefully in class.go over and relax after school. And I am going to communicate better with my teacher and classmates. Share something good with my friends and help each other.At home I will try my best to help my parents do some housework.I will wash the dishes and clean the room. At last I will protect the environment and take an active part in the volenteer work as often as possible.

I believe I will be an excellent and successful student

【解析】

試題分析：文章應(yīng)該用第一人稱，主要用一般將來時態(tài)。描述即將成為高中生的自己應(yīng)該如何做來完善自己。要注意句子的上下文的銜接，不要漏掉要點。

亮點說明：文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如 each other，try one’s best to do，it is+形容詞+to do sth等。文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。