Question

【題目】每年三月的最后一個星期一是“全閉中小學生安全教育日”。為了提高同學們的安全意識, 學校決定在畢業(yè)前再舉行一次以安全教育為主題的班會。請根據(jù)所給提示, 就日常生活中需要注意的安全寫一篇英語發(fā)言稿。

提示：1上學、放學途中的安全；2校園里的安全；3. 家里的安全。

要求：1. 80詞左右, 開頭與結(jié)尾已給出, 不計入總詞數(shù)；2. 語法正確, 語句通順、流暢；3文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名。

Hello, everyone! The last Monday in March every year is National Safety Education Day of Primary and Middle School Students. As middle school students, we should________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Safety is important. We should always keep it in mind.

Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】Hello, everyone! The last Monday in March every year is National Safety Education Day of Primary and Middle School Students. As middle school students, we should pay more attention to safety. To be safe, we must follow rules.

When we go to school or go home from school, we must follow the traffic rules For example, we must walk on walk-side. When we cross zebra-crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across the road fast. We mustn't run through red lights when crossing the road. Don't play football on the road. At school, don't push when we go upstairs or downstairs, or we may hurt ourselves or others. Never use sharp things like the knife when we play with our classmates. We should get on well with our classmates. Don't fight with them, or we'll be hurt.

At home, we should be careful when we use electricity. If there is a fire or a thief, we should call the police for help in time. Also, food safety is important. Never eat the food that goes bad.

Safety is very important. We should always keep it in mind.

Thank you!

【解析】

本文屬于話題作文，就日常生活中如何注意安全提一些建議。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。

亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如pay attention to, follow the traffic rules, play with, get on well with, fight with, in time以及祈使句stop and look right and left以及don’t play football on the road等，增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。