Question

11．在你的成長過程中，你一定得到過很多人的幫助和關(guān)愛，此時(shí)此刻你會(huì)有很多感謝的話要說．請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格提示用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文．

要感謝的人	parents	teachers	classmates
感謝的原因	give a happy life，look after	hard-working，patient，helpful	get on well，learn a lot from each other
祝愿	in good health，have a better future

要求：1．不要逐詞翻譯，文中不要提及真實(shí)的校名和姓名．
2．詞數(shù)80左右，內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展．
3．文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
    In my life，I get a lot of help and love from many people．Now I want to express my thanks to them．First，I want to thank my parents．They give a happy life to me．They do much for me．They look after me when I am sick and cook delicious food when I am at home．Second，I want to thank my teachers．They are hard-working．They are strict with me and they make me study hard．They are always patient when I ask them questions．They are helpful to me．Third，I want to thank my classmates．They make me feel less lonely and know the importance of the friendship．We get on well with each other and learn a lot from each other．I will never forget the days we played and studied together．
Thank you，my parents，my teachers and my classmates．I hope you are in good health and have a better future．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容為感謝在你成長過程中給過你幫助和關(guān)愛的人．時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱．寫作要點(diǎn)包括：1．感謝父母的照顧等 2．感謝老師的辛勤工作等 3．感謝同學(xué)．常用重點(diǎn)句型和短語：first…second…third…，be strict with sb．，get on well with each other等．

解答 In my life，I get lots of help and love from many people．Now I want to express my thanks to them．First，I want to thank my parents．They give a happy life to me．They do much for me．They look after me when I am sick and cook delicious food when I am at home．Second，I want to thank my teachers．They are hard-working．They are strict with me and they make me study hard．They are always patient when I ask them questions．They are helpful to me．Third，I want to thank my classmates．They make me feel less lonely and know the importance of the friendship．We get on well with each other and learn a lot from each other．I will never forget the days we played and studied together．
  Thank you，my parents，my teachers and my classmates．I hope you are in good health and have a better future．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇圖表給出材料的作文，題目中給出的材料較為簡略，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題．注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．