Question

8．假如你是李偉，給你遠(yuǎn)在美國(guó)讀書(shū)的表哥寫(xiě)一封信，告訴他你的近況和上周三所參加的活動(dòng)．并囑咐他遠(yuǎn)在異國(guó)他鄉(xiāng)照顧好自己．
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：（1）介紹你的近況（復(fù)習(xí)功課，積極為考試做準(zhǔn)備）
（2）參加的演講活動(dòng)   時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)：上午九點(diǎn)到十一點(diǎn)，學(xué)校圖書(shū)館
主題：如何有效地（effectively）復(fù)習(xí)
參加人員：九年級(jí)學(xué)生和老師
活動(dòng)后的感想：興奮和自信…
（3）告訴他你的復(fù)習(xí)方法并征求他的意見(jiàn)．
寫(xiě)作要求：
（1）不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名．
（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫．
（3）字跡工整、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰．
（4）至少80詞．
Dear Brother，
How are you doing？                                           
Yours，
Li Wei．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Now I'm busy getting ready for it現(xiàn)在我正忙于準(zhǔn)備考試．
be busy doing sth 忙于做某事
【高分句型二】
The score of exam is not only related to the students'usual effort，but also has business of the review before taking the exam分?jǐn)?shù)不僅與學(xué)生平時(shí)的努力有關(guān)，也和考前復(fù)習(xí)有關(guān)系．
not only…but also…不僅…而且…

解答 Dear Brother，
How are you doing？The final exam is coming．It's very important to us．Now I'm busy getting ready for it．【高分句型一】Every morning，I get up early to do some reading．Then I spend busy school hours at school．In the evening，I have so much homework to do，so I have no time to play sports or watch TV．（近況）
Last Wednesday I attended a speech about how to review effectively．All the teachers and students of Grade 9 attended．I have learnt a lot．I was so excited and confident．（活動(dòng)）
The score of exam is not only related to the students'usual effort，but also has business of the review before taking the exam．【高分句型二】For me，I try my best to review the exercise I have done before，but do not do new exercise，especially the difficult part．Then，I remember  the knowledge in the book，because all the exams are from books．Do you think if my ways are effective？Can you give me some suggestions？（你的復(fù)習(xí)方法并征求他的意見(jiàn)）
Take care of yourselves！
Yours
LiWei

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