Question

【題目】根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。

假如你是李華，你們學校英文網(wǎng)站正在針對上網(wǎng)是否是一件好事展開辯論，請你以The Internet is（not） a good thing.為題，寫一篇短文給英文網(wǎng)站投稿,說一說你認為上網(wǎng)是好事還是壞事，然后說出2-3條理由的觀點，

理由包括：人們通常用網(wǎng)做什么？為什么你認為上網(wǎng)是好/壞事？

提示詞語：download, listen to, send email, chat, relax; hack(攻擊) website, steal money, hide from police

提示問題：● Is it a good thing or a bad thing?

● What do people usually do on the Internet?

● Why do you think it is (not) a good thing?

Title: The Internet is ______

Some people say the Internet is ___________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

For these reasons, I think _____________________________________.

Answer 1

【答案】The Internet is a bad thing

Some people say the Internet is a good thing. However, I think it is a bad thing.

First of all, I think there are many bad people using the Internet. They send junk emails, hack websites and steal people’s money. In addition, it is easy for them to hide from the police.

Second, in my opinion children play too much using the Internet. Children can download games, listen to music and chat easily on the Internet. In addition, they do this for many hours.However, these kids do not want to do any homework! Therefore, the Internet is hurting their education.

For these reason, I think the Internet is not a good thing.

【解析】這篇短文要求我們以李華的身份給學校英文網(wǎng)站投稿，說明自己對上網(wǎng)這件事的看法。首先我們應(yīng)選擇一個觀點，上網(wǎng)是一件好事或不是一件好事，然后根據(jù)此觀點說明自己的理由，2到3條。因此這篇短文應(yīng)分成三段，首先說明自己的觀點；其次闡述理由，這是文章的中心；最后總結(jié)。通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意正確使用be動詞和實義動詞。還應(yīng)注意英語的表達習慣，不能逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當?shù)膯卧~和句型。以簡單句為主，句式簡潔、直接，為提升作文檔次，點綴較高級的句型，如定語從句、賓語從句、非謂語動詞等等。還應(yīng)注意語句之間的連接成分，使文章表達更流暢。