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11．假如你是李丹，請根據(jù)所給提示，用英文寫一篇推薦信，推薦王艷同學(xué)當(dāng)選校優(yōu)秀學(xué)生．詞數(shù)：80左右．信的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)、
1．王艷，16歲；一個聰明的女孩
2．學(xué)東西快，數(shù)學(xué)、語文、英語學(xué)得很好．擅長歷史，對中國歷史了解很多．
3．喜愛體育．籃球打得很好，是校籃球隊的成員．
4．善良、勇敢，樂于助人．經(jīng)常在車上給老人讓座．經(jīng)常幫助王叔叔挑水．曾（once）用一塊濕毯子撲滅過一次火災(zāi)；
Dear Sir or Madam，
I would like to recommend Wang Yan for the Best Student Award．
Wang Yan is a 16-year-old girl．She always wears a smile on her face．She is very clever and studies very hard．She learns everything quickly．She learns math，English and Chinese very well，and she is good athistory and knows much about history．She love sports．She plays basketball very well and she is in our school basketball team．After school，she often plays basketball with her classmates．She is kind and brave．She is always ready to help others．She often gives her seat to the old people on the bus．And she always help Mr．Wang carry water．Once she was brave enough to save a boy in the fire．
We think that Wang Yan should get the award．We look forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours faithfully，
Li Dan．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
She is always ready to help others他總是樂于幫助別人．
be ready to do sth準(zhǔn)備做某事
【高分句型二】Once she was brave enough to put out a fire with a wet blanket曾經(jīng)她足夠勇敢的用一塊濕毯子撲滅過一次火災(zāi)．
adj+enough to do sth 足夠怎樣做某事．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
I would like to recommend Wang Yan for the Best Student Award．
Wang Yan is a 16-year-old girl．She is a clever girl．（王艷，16歲；一個聰明的女孩）She learns things quickly．She does well in Maths，Chinese and English．She is good at History．She knows （learns） a lot about Chinese history．（學(xué)東西快，數(shù)學(xué)、語文、英語學(xué)得很好．擅長歷史，對中國歷史了解很多．）She likes sports．She plays basketball well．She is a member of the school basketball team．（喜愛體育．籃球打得很好，是�；@球隊的成員．）She is kind and brave．She is always ready to help others．【高分句型一】She often gives a seat to the old people on the bus．She often helps Uncle Wang carry water．Once she was brave enough to put out a fire with a wet blanket．【高分句型二】（善良、勇敢，樂于助人．經(jīng)常在車上給老人讓座．經(jīng)常幫助王叔叔挑水．曾（once）用一塊濕毯子撲滅過一次火災(zāi)；）
We think that Wang Yan should get the award．We look forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours faithfully，
Li Dan

點(diǎn)評 這篇作文要求我們以李丹的身份寫一封推薦信，推薦王艷同學(xué)當(dāng)選校優(yōu)秀學(xué)生．信的開頭和結(jié)尾都已經(jīng)寫好了，我們需要將主要內(nèi)容，即王艷的一些情況表述清楚．題目中給我們列出了一個提綱，我們需要用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來．這些內(nèi)容包括王艷的年齡、學(xué)習(xí)情況、愛好和她的性格特點(diǎn)．這些內(nèi)容應(yīng)該用第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)表達(dá)，所以要特別注意每句話中謂語動詞應(yīng)該用三單的形式．其中在最后一點(diǎn)中王艷救了一個男孩，這一點(diǎn)我們需要用過去時態(tài)來表達(dá)，也要注意動詞的正確形式．寫作時，要注意多使用好的句型和短語以及一些連詞，使整篇短文表達(dá)流暢，意思連貫．