Question

6．根據(jù)下表提示，以The Changes in My Hometown為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文．

過去	1．生活貧困，房屋破舊 2．污染嚴(yán)重，垃圾遍地 3．交通不便，游客很少
現(xiàn)在	1．生活：住房寬敞、明亮；許多人有自己的汽車 2．環(huán)境：山更綠，水更清，天更藍(lán)… 3．旅游：每年有成千上萬來自世界各地的游客
將來	請你展望家鄉(xiāng)的未來

The Changes in My Hometown
In the past，my hometown was very small．People lived a poor life．The houses were old and small．
Pollution was very serious，and there was rubbish everywhere．The transportation was not convenient，so few
visitors came here．
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown．The environment has become much better．The
mountains have turned greener．The rivers are clearer and the sky is bluer．There are trees，flowers and grass
everywhere．People live a better life．Their houses are large and bright．Many people have their own cars．
Every year，thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city．I'm sure my hometown will
become better and better in the future．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①The environment has become much better．環(huán)境變得更好．這里better是個比較級，much在這里修飾比較級形式．
②I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future．我相信我的家鄉(xiāng)將來會越來越好．這里be sure表示確信，相信，后面跟一個賓語從句．

解答 The Changes in My Hometown
      In the past，my hometown was very small．People lived a poor life．The houses were old and small．Pollution was very serious，and there was rubbish everywhere．The transportation was not convenient，so few visitors came here．（家鄉(xiāng)的過去）
     Now great changes have taken place in my hometown．The environment has become much better．（高分句型）The mountains have turned greener．The rivers are clearer and the sky is bluer．There are trees，flowers and grass everywhere．People live a better life．Their houses are large and bright．Many people have their own cars．Every year，thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city．（家鄉(xiāng)的現(xiàn)在）I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future（高分句型）．（家鄉(xiāng)的將來）

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