Question

下列表格中是Lily和Jack兩個(gè)人的資料, 請根據(jù)表格提供的信息, 寫一篇短文, 介紹兩人的情況。要求60-70詞。開頭已給出，詞數(shù)不計(jì)入其中。

Name	Country	Favorite color/food/animals	Get up	Go to bed (上床睡覺)
Lily	England	pink, jiaozi, pandas	6:30	9:30
Jack	Canada	blue, hamburgers, lions	6:40	9:50

Lily is an English girl. She likes pink very much. __________________________________

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Answer 1

One possible version：

Lily is an English girl. She likes pink very much. Jiaozi is her favorite food. Her favorite animals are pandas. In the morning, she gets up at 6: 30 and in the evening she often goes to bed at 9: 30. Jack is from Canada. Hisfavorite color is blue. He says hamburgers are his favorite food. He likes lions very much. He often gets up at 6: 40 in the morning and goes to bed at 9: 50 in the evening. Lily and Jack are both in Class One. They are good friends.

【解析】

試題分析：

這是一篇給材料作文，介紹Lily和Jack兩個(gè)人的信息。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Her favorite animals……；Jack is……；He likes…….及They are……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了Lily的情況，接下來介紹Jack的情況，最后指出他們是好朋友。此處用了goes to bed，is from，very much，in the evening，good friends等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。