Question

我們要有一個(gè)燦爛的未來(lái)。今天就要不懈的努力，緊張而忙碌的學(xué)習(xí)生活使我們更加充實(shí)，根據(jù)下表提示以My Day為題，寫(xiě)一篇60個(gè)詞左右的短文，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，至少用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)3個(gè)時(shí)間。

6:30 a.m.	get up
6:45 a.m.	breakfast
7:00 a.m.	go to school
7:30 a.m.	read English
5:50 p.m.	go home
6:15 p.m.	have dinner
7:20 p.m.	do homework
10:30 p.m.	go to bed（睡覺(jué)）

                                                      
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           

Answer 1

One possible version:
My Day
Everybody wants to have a wonderful future. It repures great effort. Busy school life makes my day full.
I have a regular living habit. Every day, I get up at half past six and have breakfast after fifteen minutes.I go to school at seven o'clock to begin my school day.To improve our spoken English,we read English at half past seven. At ten to six, I finish my busy school work and go back home. Our family usually have dinner at a quarter past six. After dinner,we often play games until twenty past seven.Then, I do my homework. I go to bed at 10:30 Pm。
This is my day.

試題分析：本題是一篇話(huà)題作文，需要介紹你的一天的生活。具體時(shí)間和內(nèi)容，題中已經(jīng)給出表格。需要把時(shí)間表轉(zhuǎn)換成自己的一天的描述。文章不能一味的用同一句式來(lái)進(jìn)行描寫(xiě)一天的進(jìn)程，要有所改變，避免重復(fù)乏味。另外，本題重點(diǎn)考查的是時(shí)間表達(dá)的使用。通�？梢杂媒樵~past 和to來(lái)表達(dá)。15分鐘可以用a quarter。文章語(yǔ)意要連貫。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】例文全文內(nèi)容連貫，上下銜接自然，在描述自己一天的過(guò)程的同時(shí)，開(kāi)頭進(jìn)行了評(píng)價(jià)，使全文有了中心主題，而不是簡(jiǎn)單的流水賬。另外，例文不是一味地簡(jiǎn)單描述各個(gè)時(shí)間段的內(nèi)容，句式結(jié)構(gòu)進(jìn)行了變化。比如 Every day, I get up at half past six and have breakfast after fifteen minutes. 巧妙地把兩個(gè)時(shí)間點(diǎn)連貫起來(lái)。例文除了完全描述題中所給內(nèi)容之外，還進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。