Question

健康對(duì)我們來說非常重要, 我們有很多方法來保持身體健康。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格的提示，以“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”為題，寫一篇80個(gè)詞左右的短文，倡議“健康生活”，從三個(gè)方面說明如何保持健康。短文首句已給出，不記入總詞數(shù), 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

1.food      a balanced diet, vegetables, fruit, less meat…

2.exercise   do more exercise, take a walk, play ball games…

3.happiness   keep happy, make friends, smile…

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Good Ways to Keep Healthy

It is very important for us to keep healthy. But do you know the ways to keep us healthy?

First, we need to have healthy eating habits, we can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit, but we’d better eat less meat. Different kinds of foods are necessary, it’s also important to eat a balanced diet.

Then, playing sports every day can also help us keep fit. We can take walks after dinner, we can walk to school instead of taking a bus, after school we can spend hours playing basketball or soccer with our friends. We should try to do more exercise every day.

Happiness is another way to keep healthy. When we are lonely or unhappy, try to make friends, it is a good way to keep us happy. If you smile often, you also feel happy. So, be happy to be healthy. (127words)

【解析】本題是圍繞健康展開敘述，本題已經(jīng)給出主要寫作要點(diǎn)，寫作中注意從三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行論述。在寫作時(shí)，本文的主語可以用第一，二人稱，時(shí)態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。應(yīng)該盡量包括文中提示的內(nèi)容，可稍加拓展。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。