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19．書面表達(dá)（滿分15分）
假如你是李明，你的美國筆友Bill 來信詢問你的暑假計劃．請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給他回一封信，介紹你的暑假活動安排．
內(nèi)容：1．去看望鄉(xiāng)下的爺爺奶奶，幫他們做點事；
          2．去旅游，開闊視野；     
          3．學(xué)習(xí)，為高中做準(zhǔn)備；          
          4．…
要求：1．語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；
          2．必須包含所有內(nèi)容，并做適當(dāng)拓展；
          3．詞數(shù)70左右．（文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）
參考詞匯：visit，countryside，travel，open up one's eyes，get ready for
 
Dear Bill，
Thanks for your letter．I'm very glad that you'll have much fun in your vacation．
In my summer holidays，I want to visit my country's grandparents，I have not met them for three years，I miss them so much．And I want to do some housework for them．
I also want to go to some place to travel，to see growth（我想到一些地方旅游，增長見識）．I want to go to Shanghai，understand the metropolitan life and the appearance of the city（我想去上海，了解大都市生活與城市面貌），I want to go to Beijing to see the Great Wall and the Imperial Palace（我想去北京看長城與故宮）．
I have to review for the high school knowledge，to lay a good foundation（我得認(rèn)真復(fù)習(xí)初中知識，為高一打好基礎(chǔ)）Iwouldliketoimprovemyenglishpronunciation． 我想改善我的英語發(fā)音．Iwanttoimprovemyenglish． 我想提高我的英語水平．I'd like to see more of the astronomical books我想多看些天文方面的書籍Because I think in a formation of Amateur Astronomers Association因為我想在高一組建天文愛好者協(xié)會． Looking for you r reply．
 
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 Please write soon．
                                              Yours，
                                                          Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文，要求是假如你是李明，你的美國筆友Bill 來信詢問你的暑假計劃．請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給他回一封信，介紹你的暑假活動安排，因此人稱應(yīng)該是第一人稱，時態(tài)以一般將來時為主，也可以用到I want to do sth．/I'd like to do sth．等句式，安排已經(jīng)給出，包括1．去看望鄉(xiāng)下的爺爺奶奶，幫他們做點事；2．去旅游，開闊視野；3．學(xué)習(xí)，為高中做準(zhǔn)備，還要補(bǔ)充至少一項活動．

解答 Dear Bill，
Thanks for your letter．I'm very glad that you'll have much fun in your vacation．
In my summer holidays，I  want to visit  my country's grandparents，I have not met them for three years，I miss them so much．And I want to do some housework for them．
I also want to go to some place to travel，to see growth．I want to go to Shanghai，understand the metropolitan life and the
appearance of the city，I want to go to Beijing to see the Great Wall and the Imperial Palace．
I have to review for the high school knowledge，to lay a good foundation．I would like to improve my English pronunciation．I want to improve my English．I'd like to see more of the astronomical books．Because I think in a formation of Amateur
Astronomers Association． Looking for your reply．
 Please write soon．
Yours，
Li Ming．

點評 本文是一篇提綱作文，書信的格式已給出，在寫作時要注意把自己的暑假安排寫清楚，還要補(bǔ)充至少一項活動，讓要點更全面．同時選擇一般將來時來寫，也可以多用到I want to do sth．/I'd like to do sth．等句式，讓文章更顯生動．同時還要注意專有名詞的用法和寫法．