Question

11．學(xué)校將舉辦英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作比賽．請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給提示，以"Getting along well with others"為題，寫(xiě)一篇參賽短文．

注意事項(xiàng)：
1．詞數(shù)：100詞左右（文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名，校名等信息；
3．文章必須包含所提供的主要信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
Getting along well with others No one can live without keeping in with others．Therefore，it's important for us to learn how to         

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給材料作文．本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)．動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題．寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．
高分句型：
（1）It's important for us to learn how to get along well with others，對(duì)我們來(lái)說(shuō)如何和別人相處的融洽是非常重要的．在這里It's important for sb to do sth，意思是對(duì)某某來(lái)說(shuō)做某事是重要的，it作的是形式主語(yǔ)，后面的to引導(dǎo)的不定式作真正的主語(yǔ)，get along well with sb表示與某某相處的非常融洽．
（2）If we can get along well with others，we will enjoy ourselves every day and succeed when we do anything．如果我們能和別人相處得好，我們每天都會(huì)玩得很開(kāi)心，當(dāng)我們做任何事情的時(shí)候都會(huì)成功．在這里if引導(dǎo)的是一個(gè)條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主句用一般將來(lái)時(shí)，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，enjoy ourselves 玩的高興，過(guò)得愉快．

解答 Getting along well with others．
No one can live without keeping in with others．Therefore，it's important for us to learn how to get along well with others（高分句型）．（引出話題）We should be kind and friendly enough to others，so we can make more friends．We can share joy and sadness with our friends．If we are free，we can do volunteer work to help our neighbours．At home，we should communicate more with our parents．They are our closest people in the world．At school，we should respect our teachers．（分層說(shuō)明與朋友，鄰居，父母如何相處）They are like both our parents and friends．Getting along well with others is very important．If we can get along well with others，we will enjoy ourselves every day and succeed when we do anything（高分句型）．（總結(jié)說(shuō)明和別人相處的重要性）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少．如：get on well with others和其他人相處得好；friendly enough 足夠友好；communicate with our parents與父母交流．If we can get along well with others，we will enjoy ourselves every day and succeed when we do anything．如果我們能和別人相處得好，我們每天都會(huì)玩得很開(kāi)心，當(dāng)我們做任何事情的時(shí)候都會(huì)成功．學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．