Question

17．請根據(jù)下面表格中的信息提示，寫一篇關(guān)于瀕危野生動物的英語短文，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．要求：1.80詞左右，語言流暢，無語法錯誤．2．可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．

現(xiàn)狀	在我國，野生動物的數(shù)量越來越少，有些甚至瀕臨滅絕．
原因	人們大量砍伐樹木；污染水源，大量捕殺野生動物．
措施	禁止亂砍亂伐樹木；建立自然保護(hù)區(qū)．

參考詞匯：die out絕跡 nature reserves自然保護(hù)區(qū)
In China，the number of wild animal isless and less，some are even endangered．We should protect them well．People often kill wild animals and cut down thetrees in forests．As a result，without the trees the animals lost theirhome and their food．And many animals are dying out because of water pollution．
I think that we should protect wild animals．Peoplemustn't cut downthe trees andfactories shouldn't pollute rivers and air．We should set up nature reserves．We will have a beautiful world to share with them．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
And many animals are dying out because of water pollution由于水污染，許多動物瀕臨滅絕．because of 因為…，后加代詞/名詞/動詞的ing形式．
   高分句型二
  I think that we should protect wild  animals我認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)野生動物．這是一個賓語從句，I think是主句，后面的是賓語從句．

解答 In China，the number of wild animal is less and less，some are even endangered【要點一，現(xiàn)狀】．We should protect them well． People often kill wild animals and cut down the trees in forests．As a result，without the trees the animals lost their home and their food．And many animals are dying out because of water pollution【高分句型一，注意because of 的使用】．【要點二，原因】
     I think that we should protect wild  animals【高分句型二，注意賓語從句的使用】．People mustn't cut down the trees and  factories shouldn't pollute rivers and air．We should set up nature reserves．【要點三，措施】

點評 動筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語，句式等問題．注意不要遺漏要點，句子要通順連貫，沒有語法錯誤．