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目前，校園安全事故時有發(fā)生。為了增強同學們的安全意識，學校決定進行一次以 “How to Keep Our Life Safer”為題的演講大賽。請用你英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，倡導同學們注意交通安全、飲食安全等等。

要點：1.過馬路，要遵守交通規(guī)則。紅燈停，綠燈行；

2.不要喝冷水，不要吃不健康的食物；

3.同學相處，要注意安全，不要在街上玩耍；

4.不與陌生人交談，不要隨陌生人去任何地方。

要求：內(nèi)容完整，敘述清楚。80個詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

How to Keep Our Life Safer

Hello, everyone! I’m Jiang, Li from Class One Grade Nine. My topic is about safety.

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Answer 1

【答案】

How to Keep Our Life Safer

Hello, everyone! I’m Jiang, Li from Class One Grade Nine. My topic is about safety. Safety is the first. There is some advice we must remember: First, when you cross the road, we must obey the rules. We mustn’t cross the road when the light is red. We must wait until the light turns green. Second, when we are hungry, we can’t drink too much cold water, or eat things that are unhealthy. Third, when we play games with our classmates, we should be careful not to hurt ourselves or others. Don’t play in the street. Fourth, don’t talk with strangers Don’t follow a stranger to any strange places. That’s all. Thank you for listening.

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求寫一篇發(fā)言稿，倡導安全。要根據(jù)提綱提示，完整、全面地倡議學生注意各方面的安全。短文要用第一人稱進行表達。作為一篇演講稿，可以適當用一些情態(tài)動詞及祈使句等等。

寫作亮點：作者首先提出觀點：安全是第一要素。接著從如何注意交通安全；如何注意食品安全；與同學相處時如何注意彼此的安全；注意與陌生人相處的安全。短文用first, second, third, fourth, 依次講述各項安全規(guī)則，層次清楚，條理分明；文中用了祈使句，情態(tài)動詞must， mustn’t，安全規(guī)則嚴肅、不容置疑。表述清楚，語言準確；用了when引出的條件從句，為短文增色不少。