Question

【題目】假如你是張玉，是一名九年級學生，即將面臨中考，可是你在英語作文方面有困難。請給某英語報社的編輯寫一封電子郵件，請教如何提高英語寫作技能。80詞左右。信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

Dear editor,

I’m a middle school student of Grade Nine. And I’m working hard for the coming senior high school entrance examination.

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Zhang Yu

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

I’m a middle school student of Grade Nine. And I’m working hard for the coming senior high school entrance examination. I can do a good job on all of the questions in the English exam except the writing. I have been putting my heart into it, but I still can’t write a good article. Every time I begin to write, it seems that all of the words run out of my mind, and I always make mistakes when I write. What should I do ? Could you please give me some advice on how to improve my English writing? I am looking forward to your reply soon. Thank a lot.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Zhang Yu

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求介紹自己在英語作文的困難，并向編輯請教如何提高英語寫作技能。注意在寫作時用第一人稱單數。主要用一般現在時態(tài)。

【亮點說明】這篇短文內容切題，意思連貫，表達清楚、完整。時態(tài)靈活多變，非常合適。能準確的表達句子的意思。句型句式運用恰當，多見好句型和習慣表達用語，如it seems that…., and I always make mistakes when I write., run out of my mind, I am looking forward to your reply soon.等等。